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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Didn't care for the whet you had Yusuke say keikos name after being with sango. Sango and Yusuke were perfect together. Thank you for including ask odd the other characters as well. I hope you decide to make another yusuke and sango story.
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was another great story
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story. i really loved reading it. you did a wonderful job with this.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are some grammar and word usage mistakes (i.e.: You put '...she was pregnant from Yusuke' instead of 'she was having Yusuke's baby' and '...it was about to storm' instead of 'is was about to rain'), but other than that this story has been great! You have become one of my favorite authors (right up there with Kirara81, Rinseternalsoul and KogasAngel). I've read/plan to read almost all of your stories. ^_^
I feel really bad for Sango though. *patpatpat* Poor thing won't talk to Yusuke about the baby, her feelings, nothing. And it doesn't seem like Kagome is helping her cope. She's just leaving Sango to wallow in her own self-pity. But I have noticed a pattern. You've had this happen to Kagome in your OC(Ko)/Yus fic and again in your Ka/Yo/Ku fic. You can tell when one of the girls is pregnant because you always skip ahead in time, be it months or years (not to mention I've read a story where an author has done somthing simular to this). There's that and you've also brought Inuyasha back twice (as far as I know anyway). That's cool though. Most of the rest of your stories is unpredictable. *nods*
Well, either way your stories are addictable. ^o^ I love them! I'll finish this one up and start on the next asap! *wavies* = D
~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
I feel really bad for Sango though. *patpatpat* Poor thing won't talk to Yusuke about the baby, her feelings, nothing. And it doesn't seem like Kagome is helping her cope. She's just leaving Sango to wallow in her own self-pity. But I have noticed a pattern. You've had this happen to Kagome in your OC(Ko)/Yus fic and again in your Ka/Yo/Ku fic. You can tell when one of the girls is pregnant because you always skip ahead in time, be it months or years (not to mention I've read a story where an author has done somthing simular to this). There's that and you've also brought Inuyasha back twice (as far as I know anyway). That's cool though. Most of the rest of your stories is unpredictable. *nods*
Well, either way your stories are addictable. ^o^ I love them! I'll finish this one up and start on the next asap! *wavies* = D
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,GOOD. i loved the story, i would say up-date, but i dont think you will. loved it. Tris
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was one of the best iy/yyh stories i have read i can't wait for you to finish your other stories.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you shared this story with us! I really enjoyed your sense of style and voice--very nice! I'll be looking forward to more of your work in the future.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is one the best i have ever read. It was funny as well as beautiful. but i would like to know is at the end, who was who when they were reincarnated. i already kind of know who is miroku.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you ganna write a story about their kigs it??? this story was awsome thanks a bunch for writing it ^^
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Yusuke just had to walk in!! Evil evil toushin.... We coulda been seeing round two!! Damn Kagome is a lucky girl lol Good chapter, can't wait to read more. Please update soon.