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I am still waiting....

*swoon*
Oh
My
GOD.
That was quite possibly the hottest sex scene EVER.
Write on, my friend, write on.

I don't even know where to start... First off, great chapter. It flows perfectly, and it's made up of words so I'd say yeah, it's wordy. Lol. Thank you for your 'pep talk' (as you called it). It was much appreciated. I do read a lot, and I find that it really does help improve my writing. Another thing I forgot to mention last time was how impressed I am that you update so fast. People on mediaminer.org never, and I mean never, update that quickly. I'm used to waiting weeks, and most of the time, months for an update. So, thank you for updating so quickly. Especially after a cliffhanger like that. So thank you, and I love your story, and it's midnight and I need to go to bed. G'night!

Just got done reading all eleven chapters and I must say this is the best Inu/Kag fanfic I have ever read here on AFF. Keep up the great work.

I absolutely love this story. You need to continue it so please update soon!!!

Great work, it is about time Inu gots some....I really like this fic....please don't stop. I will be waiting for you to update.

MORE PLEASE. UPDATE SOON. AND YOU SUCCEEDED.

next chapter please and inuyasha never fucked kagome from behind by the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a great and well written story. The writting just leaves with great visuals on how the characters are feeling and what there seeing. So keep up the good work and the last chapter I thought was one of the better written lemons I've read so good job. Please update soon so we know what happens now.

Hey that was a GREAT lemon and it flowed just fine can't wait till the next chap. please write more!!!