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for A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou

by cukid9

person Angie/les
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry I know who vincent price is without have watched much of edward scissorhands. he's a wonderful actor he was in the raven, ummm a really old very of house on haunted hill I think. And many others. I do beleive I have seen the movie you mentioned.
person Rei
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOOOOOOOOOOL!TEHEHE A LIL TORTURE DONT HURT NOBODY ! WELL EXCEPT FOR THE POOR CHARACTERS THAT HAVE TO WITHSTAND IT NYAHAHAHAHA WELL ANYWAYS LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE! NARAKU MANAGED TO GET A SMALL PIECE OF THE JEWEL NE? WELL SEE YOU IN THE NEXT ONE!
person ......
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vincent Price...I say he is best known for "The House On Haunter Hill" but thats my opinion. And this chapter, spine chilling. Grr. Naraku and his plots! But I loved how you protrayed him. It was nicely done. As well as how Kagome accepted Inuyasha...I'll re-read that part to get Naraku out of my head. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i...WOW! this is a great story! though i must truthfully admit that i don't like that title that much, it makes Kagome sound like a "thing"... but it's alright. the fic makes up for it. the torture part was definately something new to the fic, but it works out nicely. so Naraku was poking and pording her with "instruments" trying to find where the jewel was at? sad... i liked the way you described it! it was so vivid and real! love your story, and update soon!
person kit master
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huh!! oh no!!! Kagome!!! please review soon, I can't leave this chair until you do!!!
person Sarandra
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just spent 4 hours reading from word one of this fic. That should tell you how much I enjoyed this. Please tell me there's more! So many unanswered questions! I don't even really read Inuyasha fics, but figured I'd give it a shot. And, BTW, I am very happy that you are as OCD as I am about spelling and grammar. I can't read a lot of fics because of the badness of them. But, then I am lucky and find a good one! =^_^= Many thanks and keep it coming!
person mortefille
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked your story and I wanna know when Inuyasha will tell her about the new moon. And when sesshoumaru meets kagome and what naraku wants with kagome though I kinda have and Idea of what he wants of her. Well keep writing I like your story. ^.^
person RavenWind
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am very impressed by this story! I usually don't like modern-day Inuyasha fics, but something drew my attention to this one, though I can't say for sure what it was. I really love the story, and I'm glad to see you've continued it. I've been working on my own, and I haven't been updating as much as I should, so I understand ^_^ You just can't do it whenever you want, huh? You're a talented writer, and I hope you continue to work on this masterpiece!

~RavenWind
person Byako (NSI)
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's one of my favourites. The whole female dancer bit, I love it!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter^^ Along with a lovely lemon! I like how you put Naraku in, I think it was done perfectly, with his arrogance and everything. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!