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aww... how nice, but who's the mystery person that was in the void? Or were you describing kagome? Finally, I'm starving. Plz update soon. *says through mouth full of turkey sandwich*

This chapter was soooooooooo good. I loved how Inuyasha really took Kagome home. It was so sweet of him...but will he and Kagome ever sit down and really talk about the Shikon no Tama and Kikyou and what happened in the past? I really want them to stay together, they are happy together even if they do have their differences. I'm going to re-read this one again as well. Such a nice chapter. And watch the original "House on Haunted Hill" its better than the remake (though the remake is scary...that white lady thing...). And sorry about the "dots" thing. I like the name. ^^ Keep up the wonderful work and I can't wait tell the next wonderful chapter so update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like how fast you update, it gives me something to look forward to.. unlike some other stories that take forever to update. Now I'm curious as to how Naraku will fit into this whole thing now that shes not going to be in the ballet that he dances in??? I really like your lemons to^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

I'm sorry I lost track of events. Did the Naraku thing happen the new moon? But it was okay chapter.

I really like how you are piecing everything together with Naraku and the Shikon No Tama. It's that like the "Story of what could've happened if the tv series Inu Yasha took place in the present" though I doubt that she would've been an adult dancer, but then again it could also be more of a kinky version of Inu Yasha. Anyways, awesome chapter, the torture wasn't too bad, I've read a lot more sickening torture to the point where I had to leave the room to not read it or else I would be sick, and I have a VERY strong stomach. But I'm happy that in the end, twas all happy in a sense that Naraku was pushed away and Inu Yasha found her. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

please, PLEASE continue. i really love this story it's become one of my favrites and i've read a lot of storys.
so please, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!
I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was good...you are a good writer...plz update

Dear God. You were right. The begining was wonderful. All the fluff-as I would call it-was amazing. The acceptance from Kagome concerning Inuyasha becoming human on the full moon. Beautiful. But then the Naraku part. Well that was just...well you said you read worse. I on the other hand haven't. It's quite torture-ish. Thanks for the warning. I don't know if this is going to sound weird, but the torture was written very good. But not that I wanted Kagome to go through pain, its just well...after I read your story I started to check out some torture stories but yours gave so much...emotion and detail...I felt like I was in Kagome's place. Now that is talent. You are a ver very very good writter. I absolutely have to nominate you for a IY Fan Fiction Contest. Have you tried entering? You would do great and possibly even win. Anyways sorry for the long review. I don't think it low key at all. It was neccesary to input torture in there. With Naraku and all. Sick bastard. Hehe...anyways I really hope you update soon. I will be looking forward to your up and coming chapters. THANKS!

update soon please I look forward to the next chapter. Excellent job by the way on your discription of tourture, very vivid.

I think the funniest line I have ever read was when Kagome asked him if he'd still love her if she was a fire breathing dragon once a month. His reply made me burst out laughing. I loved it! Your story is really very good.