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THAT WAS COOL!!! HAHAHA SO WHAT IF IT WAS SHORT? IT WAS EXPLOSIVE!!! I LOVED IT WHEN THEY DID THE TANGO! TEHEHEHE WELL SEE YOU IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!

I didn't mean to be harsh whenever i mentioned the title of your fic... but i am glad that you agree with me. and as i said before, the fic makes up for it. it should be called something along the lines of dancing and the shikon no tama... "Tainted Dance" , or dancing...maybe even dancer. hell, why not? whats's her name mean in japanese? i forgot, but maybe you can put that into the title... along with the word 'tainted'...
bleh... besides that, the chapter was great. definately was a filler chapter, and shorter than the others, but i really don't care. i mean, at least you updated... that lemon was definatley a surprise, but hey? who doesn't like lemons. i personally like my lemonade on a hot day with a sweet tang to it, lol. this was the first time that kagome's mom was introduced into the fic, am i right? mother's seem to know everything, it's cool and weird at the same time, Mrs.H being no exception.
i'm glad that you put this chapter in! Kagome SO needed time to 'heal', and get a grip on what just happened to her. the begininng did confuse me though, i won't lie and say it didn't. i was like 'eh?'...lol. but the whole 'healing time' was a good call on your part!
i should have wrote this earlier, but i am pretty much writing in complete darkness... don't ask me why... i only have the compuer screen as my 'light'. so if there are some words in here and you are just looking at them like 'WTF?!', ttthhhaaattt'sss probablt my fault. and if you can understand this whole enchilada ok, then i guess i'm not bad for a blind writer!

I've been tracking this story since it was about seven chapters long, and thought I should drop a line... I gotta say, wow. I just recently became an Inu-fan myself (damn Takahashi and her loudmouthed bish -.- yes, don't think I missed where Inuyasha's last name came from - clever) and I can thoroughly appreciate the intricacies you've woven here. Everything has a place and purpose and even though the story is unique and original, it remains true to the theme of Rumiko's work and relationships really haven't changed. It's beautiful work with ingenious plot twists - all-around good writing. You don't see much of that in fanfic, sadly. And the best part is that it's coherent and grammatically correct - now, I've got no beef with a few typos, everyone has them, but if I come across a story where the chapter is all bunched together in a single paragraph, or you have to reread a single line several times to make sense of it, I just say, "This is bull. I'm not reading this." Your story hooked me immediately, not only with the plot but with diction and your excellent use of vocab, wry humor and the way you manage to get your point across without being wordy. The NC-17 scenes are fabulous, so don't be shy about writing them. I can't wait to read more! Great story.

-JK

I love this story. Tji story is really good and i can't wait until you update the story because i want to know what happens next. ^_^

i really love this story! i never thought of kagome as a dominatrix kinda girl, but it really works for her. you really know how to keep a girl hooked!!!

Ah, sorry it took me so long to write this, but I just read chapter 13, and I must say it was a wonderful lemon. And I read the A/N's! Author notes rock. :-D Well I'm gonna get back to reading, and hopefully I'll better fulfill my duty as a faithful reviewer later. (Wow, lot's of f's in that last sentence. O_O)

You know, I always thought that I was pretty good with words, with describing things and such, but... wow. I don't have words for the emotion you put into chapter 14. It was amazing! The way you described a child's nightmare, how Kikyo came out (yes, I figured that out. :-P I'm only a little blonde) and how you described Kikyo leaving Kagome, like a breath expelled. I'm shocked really. Not that I didn't think you were a great writer before (I did) but... just, wow. See, I told you I didn't have words. I hate to use someone else's words, but another reviewer for another story described it like taking a piece of chocolate from an assorted chocolate box, and expecting it to have peanut butter, but instead finding sweet, smooth caramel. (I LOVE caramel, but if you prefer peanut butter, I'm sure you can switch the two.) Just... beautiful.

You are amazing. No matter how many reviews any one person might get as an author, I think they never truly realize how talented they are. Doubly so for you. As the critics say, two thumbs WAY up!

-LaLa13

I simply can not gush enough praise. So yeah, theres that.

cool chapter!!! panic attack* oh crappies id write more but i gotta go!!!! see ya in the next one!!!! !

::chants:: Good, good, good. Lol. I really like this story and look forward to it every time you update. It's very well written. I like it ALOT. ::claps::

~LauReN