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Heh I have read alot of inuyasha fic and alot of it was NC-17 rated but I just finished reading that first chapter and I have to say that was the most brilliant description of a lapdance I have ever read LOL! Anyway it's been a while since a fic has caught my attention that quickly after reading the first chapter so I expect this to be interesting.

Great story I had today and yesterday off and was in the mood to read something enjoyable this was a really nice little tale I absolutely loved it. The description of the dances were fantastic I could really see it all in my head it was pure poetry. Lovely just lovely! I have read other storys that have dancing in them but I don't think any of them described it half as well as you did. the tango at the end was just sinful! Well done :)

u r rite i say"She left so many unanswered questions!! What about Naraku?! And the piece of the Jewel that's missing?! Not to mention, it took her this long to update...and now she's telling us it's the end.?! "

love it,
I WANT MORE,
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it's so good.
---cool chic

hey. i've just finished your whole story...and...wow....

absolutely beautiful!! i loved every minute of it!! i really do hope you write a sequel. because i will most certainly read it! wonderful job!

Wow...just...wow. The shock of FINALLY finding a good story worth actually spending a good part of the day to read! It certainly has been a while since I've read a story that is far more than just mediocre, and I'm very thankful that you wrote it!

It was such an interesting plot. Kagome as a stripper, and being dominant in bondage...I genenerally tend to skirt around plots with those elements because they are just so...un-kagome-like, I suppose. And Inuyasha submitting to anyone is a little hard to swallow as well, lol...but suprisingly, you did such a good job with it! I actually read it all the way through and enjoyed all the aspects of the story, not just a few of them while scoffing at the rest.

I seriously hope you continue and write a continuation for this story. I'm interested to see where you'll go with it. You did a great job! And don't put yourself down so much about your supposed inability to be funny. There were several parts in this story that made me smile and even laugh out loud (You have a knack for giving your characters amusing banter), and having a handful of moments like that are very good for balancing out a story just right. Not enough to distract, but enough to keep things a little lighter than they might have been otherwise. ^_^ Keep it up, and I can't wait to see more from you in the future!

excellent story! I actually like the way it ended. It did leave many unanswered questions, but now I have something to forward too! Can't wait for the sequel!

Oh my GOD. That was phenomenally awesome. This story is amazing and please, you have to make a SEQUEL!!! Keep it up, and you've got my rare "Two Seven-Ups!" which is sorta of a thumbs up, only with sevens in sign language (O.O yes, I'm deaf) and believe me not MANY people (fic writers) get this. I'm also currently working on a fic myself, Hot Gimmick "Love Equals Squared" and would be honoured if you could take the time to read it. Thanks! And seriously, Keep up THE GREAT WORK!!! I look foward to your next fic.

wonderful ending to a wonderful story. i can't wait for that sequel. i'm so honored that you have read my story, that makes me smile. this story is nothing short of amazing. you have a great talent for writing description and angst. poor kag!! damn naraku; i would have loved to see what inu would have done if they ran into each other face to face. damn. GREAT story!!! amazing, simply amazing. oh, the inuyasha fan fiction guild is a group out there that has nominatoins four times a year for the best of teh best fan fiction peices that readers come to find. i think there are about five hundred of us members but normally only a given fifty or sixty vote. it's amazing. there is another group being forged much the same under the feudal association. email me if you want to know more. :-)

This was absolutely amazing! Normally I tend to move away from Inuyasha/Kagome pairings but you've done so wonderfully that I couldn't help but adore them. You've written fabulously on all the sexy scenes, but you didn't take away from the everyday scenes either. I couldn't help but sit here and read through the whole thing (even when I have work just waiting to be done... oops ^_~). You've managed to draw me into the characters, their lives and their thoughts, and you do have some amazing plot twists. The dancing scenes in particular drew me in, you were very precise with the details. Not to mention the craving for a cigarette after some scenes ^_~. Fantastic work, please write more!!