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for A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou

by cukid9

person dog demon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE STORY. SAW THE 7TH CHAPTER UP. AND THANKS, BUT IT WAS JUST 6 TIMES AND THIS WILL BE THE 7TH. AND THANK YOU FOR STARTING THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND DON'T GIVE UP ON IT.
person InuyashaLover20
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I didn't imagine Kagome being a stripper and it also reminds me of a song called "Let me go" by 3 Doors Down. Their music video is about a stripper who is misunderstood by her boyfriend, but she gives him hell in the end. For some reason Kagome's aura must be calling to Inuyasha and that's why he is so "interested" in her. Or maybe all the other strippers suck at dancing and Kagome actually can move to the beat. *rofl* Makes you kinda wonder. Anywho, great job. I'm lovin' and feelin' this story. I want, no, I need more. Update soon.
person kit master
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter, plz update soon. Too bad, no bashing =( Oh well
person naxuma
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no, thank YOU for making Inuyasha the sexy beast that he is. ;P
person dog demon
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. HURRY AND UPDATE IT PLEASE.
person kit master
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the interplay of what I'm assuming was a perivious disaster with kikio. Please do a bashing i hate that BITCH
person amhor56
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH! Amazing! My heart was beating so fast when you wrote that she was trying to hide. It didnt stop until the end. I can't believe you ended it like that. Personally I think your trying to torture us readers with excellent writting and the end. I can't believe he called her Kikyou! So Kikyou is in this story. Ahhh! I hope you update real soon! Oh and thanks for chapter 6 so soon! Kudos!
person DaisyLee1239
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna tell you that although I'm getting really sick of feeling so obligated to review every story I read, I don't mind typing a few words for those really good writers like yourself! You have an awesome story going! Not trying to sound perverted or kinky, but some parts of it seriously turn me on! The type of story itself may be a tad overused, but a talented author/authoress can make it work, and you are certainly talented! I really like your story; in fact, I'm hooked. I'm would be lying if I said that I wasn't hooked on a lot of other stories, but that just means that you rank with the best of 'em! Please continue to update frequently, I really appeciate not having to wait a week or a month to read one short chapter that barley moves the plot forward or not at all AND leaves me hanging on a cliff! Sorry, just a little ranting! Anyway, great job, God bless you, and please update soon?!
person Rei
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
geeeez whats with kagome? she's being such a cooooowaaard weelll anyway cool chapter !! looking forward to the next one!
person Naxuma
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squee* I love it! keep it up!