rate_review Reviews

I love your story, as for the name it's good, you could probably also call it something like 'More than just a stripper' since she is in fact more than just a stripper

So after reading this I have to express my disappointment but I feel that I have to say this first. I'm not a writer though I have tried, so I'm not going to preach and nag, because it is hard to write and I also know how much emotion can sometimes get put into it. I was in love with the style of the story from the first chapter and just got more and more into it as I kept reading. I could see where this started out just being a flirty lemon piece, but when it took a turn toward the dark after the middle I was overjoyed. I could have happily kept reading where the muses were leading you, but you shied away at the end, and that is my disappointment. I know it doesn't matter what I think really and honestly I can understand that you seem to have moved away from fan fiction and that I think is wonderful, because just reading the fan fiction I could tell that you had serious writer in your heart. So I'll not ask for you to come back to Inuyasha but I am sad that weren't able to follow though on your instinct in this story.

Ok.. Now I am hooked.. Can not wait to see where this goes...

I loved this story! You have a great writing style. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

you really have a way of bringing emotion out in your readers. I found myself tearing up at a couple moments... quite a thing for me (I never really get that involved with a story) but some how your writing managed! Very good and very moving. My only complaint, like yours I guess, is the ending. It wasn't bad... but considering the greatness of the entire story, it was kinda a let down of sorts. The ending would have been good for most of the stories I read, but yours needs something... more I guess, can't describe it. Anyway, wonderful story, great characters, true emotion, and very compelling... as always! Can't wait for more! ~inuslilmiko~

That is a perfect ending. It really doesn't leave me with questions that I really want answered, it leaves me with an ending that I can imagine happily. It balances itself on the point of an upturned beat and a splendid, graceful flow into a lovely ending that does just what it should. Your story took on a mind of its own and you let it, therefore the story could conclude itself the way it needed, perfectly. Thank you for letting me correct you, it was a wonderful story with a wonderful ending that fit it beautfully. The entire thing reminded me of a ballet, really. A beginning, inviting, headstrong and invigorating. The middle, where the piece speeds up and you see characters take shape and talent being displayed, then the end, where the graceful have stayed, survived the crescendo, and now get their chance to leave the rest of their dance to the audience. Perfect.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! Your an A*FING*MAZING writer. Please update again soon!...and there will be more updates right..i mean your not just going to leave it there and torture me like that are you? PLEASE I NEED YOU!!!!!!!*breaks down into hysteria* lol ok i'll leave you be now!
much love,
Portia

so i just wanna say.. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
though you're right. you did leave the reader hanging with some stuff.
like naraku, the last piece of the jewel..
so if you could please tell me if you're written a sequel already
that would be mighty appreciated haha
awesome job on the fic!
^_^

Wow, I love this fic. I also like how you have Kagome being more aggressive. Its quite amusing, lol. But Inuyasha should be more dominant in the bed, ahah, its just hes that way, you know? lol. But hey, i give no cruel thoughts to Kagome being dominant, cuz I bet its quite fun doing whatever you please to Inuyasha. Lol. Great job, keep up the good work and I can't wait till the next update.