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for HEARTLESS

by tabatha

person gina
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! i love this story !!! more please??? =)
person XYZ
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe I didn't review before... I read it already, but somehow forgot to leave a review... *makes a guilty face*, anyway, excellent story, absolutely lovely. In a society where money equals power, there is so much corruption and scandal, it is amazing that Kagura is manages to abstain from getting dragged into ti. Interesting idea to make Naraku kagura's brother... Please continue, I'm dying to read more.
person MeLaiya
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there are a few mistakes and places where it could be better but overall i really like it. Keep up the good work.
person Byako (Not Signed In)
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's great! Keep writing!!! And gosh darn you and the cliffy!
person silent pluto
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The whole set-up is great! I don't know how i can help your writer's block. But I'm sure you can come up with something!
If you want to e-mail me for some idea's be my guest! Just hope you get some writing done, cause this story needs a climax!!!
^_~
person kimisan
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't read other fanfic, if I do hardly any AU. But I decided to check yours out. I will admit that I liked it, something new and different. Most people put Inuyasha as the bad boy or what-not. I like where you are going with this and can't wait for you to update. *Hands you a cookie*
person kogagirl05
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Actually I think you are a good writer!!! Can't wait to read the rest.
person MJ
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally get into AU fics but I really hope you update this one soon, it's great!
person Frimm
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice...i actually think both kagura and sesshy are portrayed exactly as their characters would be in the modern age, only i don't think seshy would be inclined to go with all the gilrs that threw themselves at him...
as for the rest...the whole koga ayame thing is backwards, it's ayame who pines after koga, not the other way round...but apart from that..everythings good
Frimm
person Paranoia
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, do us all a favor and learn how to write properly.