rate_review Reviews

This is an interesting story. This is the first
Kagura/Sesshamaru story I've ever read. (I
hope I spelled the names right...) Keep it up.
I'd like to see how their relationship grows.
I'd also like to know what the pictures were and
what's going to happen with them. Crazyness.

I really like this story and I hope you update soon.

Im so glad you updated I've been with the story sinse first post.But theres such a gap in updates...But its ok I do the same at time.But plz keep up the update no matter how many reviews I want to see this story through!!!

ooooh that'd be really funny if Akane walked in on that one.... lol

Tabatha,i like "heartless" a lot & wanna read more so please,please,please hurry up & update!!!Oh,and throw in a couple more steamy,hot lemons,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter! Keep it up :)

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. I would really like to see what going to happen in the next chapter. So please UPDATE SOON. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE.

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hey i'm a begging writer my self so if you could help me with my story as well i'll enjoy much. oh yeah love the story and some edvice why don't you put a little bit of inuyasha and kagome love in there to just spice things up a bit. (killa story and can't wait for the next chappie) ^.~

Well, this is just a joy to read! I'm loving your character development, and I'm really intrigued by the Yura/Muso pairing here. How sweet is that little love story! You may want to find a beta reader to catch some of your writing errors though. There were two very glaring mistakes, 'dough' instead of 'though', and 'rotting' instead of 'rooting', that distracted me and interupted the flow of the reading. Please don't take my comments as a flame. I am not flaming you. I really like what you have here! Believe me! I understand just how difficult it is to post a mistake-free piece of work after thinking up the story and sitting in fornt of a computer screen for hours typing it up. Even your proof reader won't catch everything, but it is amazing how much a fresh pair of eyes can help. Anyway, keep it coming! I'm ready for more!