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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a-ok, I like how you use their attitudes to their full extent. Now let me put on some Green Day and I'll read the 2nd chap
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I walk a lonely road--- oh sorry, good i guess, Yura and ayame remind me of me and my bff
oh well nice for 2 and 3... Track 10, and next chapter
oh well nice for 2 and 3... Track 10, and next chapter
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the latest chapter, I want more! ^_^
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun fun, glad to see you updated. keep it coming!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoooohooooo
luv the chapter man!
i think muso and yura is a great pairing 2
haha does inutashio even like akane? i can't remember if he does or not and i'm to lazy to go back and check.
anyway update really soon
luv the chapter man!
i think muso and yura is a great pairing 2
haha does inutashio even like akane? i can't remember if he does or not and i'm to lazy to go back and check.
anyway update really soon
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need some more chapters please. ^_^
Rock On
Rock On
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay.
a good continuation, i like the way you made that episode with the wine a daydream. but what i don't get is why sesh was acting all nice to her on the way back to her house? didn't he say he wanted to get back at her? anyways, maybe i misread or something but good continuation, and please continue the story. those two are my favorits pairing, and of course, you have their attitudes down pat!
FRIMMMMMMMMMMMM
a good continuation, i like the way you made that episode with the wine a daydream. but what i don't get is why sesh was acting all nice to her on the way back to her house? didn't he say he wanted to get back at her? anyways, maybe i misread or something but good continuation, and please continue the story. those two are my favorits pairing, and of course, you have their attitudes down pat!
FRIMMMMMMMMMMMM
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your beginig, you have the possibility of a great story. the plot works, so does that idea itself.
the chapters could be a bit longer, but ya know...
i hope you didn't forget about this story, cause if you finish it, it would definately be worth reading.
so far so good!
Frimm
the chapters could be a bit longer, but ya know...
i hope you didn't forget about this story, cause if you finish it, it would definately be worth reading.
so far so good!
Frimm
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyhey
me again hehe
plz update soon
me again hehe
plz update soon
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good. I like the plot line and I can't wait to read more. Kagura is one of my favorite characters. I know you said not to go too hard on you, but your grammar is pretty bad. I don't want to offend you or anything, but maybe you could try using spellcheck on word or something? It would make your work easier to read. Other than that, it's a great read. Keep it up! (said at the risk of sounding corny...)
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