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for HEARTLESS

by tabatha

person Akasha
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad theres an update, I've been waiting anxiously for it. ^_^
person anonymous
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! When are Sesshomaru and Kagura gonna get together!!! Pleeeezzzz keep on updating
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Keep writting :)
person Akasha
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Merry Christmas and thanks for the perfect gift of an update! ^_^
person Too
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way that chap. 9 ended although I have to admit that the story is going kind a slow for my taste, but I love it the most original Sesshomaru and Kagura that I've read far please continue and update soon.
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story and i also find it some what funny cant wate to see that happens next.
person Cleo
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I think it's great. Do you think you could make Kagura less....I dunno....like desparate, please? It's great, it's just she seems really desperate and he's such a jerk to her. But other than that, great job! :) keep up the good work! :)
person nutmeg
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updates! ^_^ Feed the readers more chapters? ~_^
person Inu-midoriko
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey,
awsome!
I've been hit across the chin and temple with a bokin. thats what a wooden sword is called, anyway it hurts but it's fun
person Imuyana
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Imuyna has a strong oppinion that the "ass" is Kikyo.
That bitch, i swear to you that she couldn't change a car tire if her life depended on it!
She seems to feeble, not a hand to hand combat fighter.
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I think mybe you should add a twist, mayb actually lt naraku and sesshomaru face each other, letting kagura cheer her brother on but at the same time
sesshomaru. And at the same time you should let muso drive "ass" instead of fixing her car, but kick the old man out of the car.And this akane,
maybe you should give her more of a bitchy side.
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I dont evn know why i am suggesting this, its your writers block.