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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe climbing trees must be fun. Lol, go Kagome...expressing her dominance over him, for the moment. 'She's trying to kill me' - yes, Inuyasha she is, but only cuz she loves you. :)
And for someone who is not so innocent herself, Akane sure keeps tabs on Sesshy. I just don'tget how she can get mad when she fucks around herself. Does she really expect him to stay hard & lonely while she fucks away in Switzerland? You've got the hottest guy around so it comes naturally.
*Throws herself at Sesshomaru*
Lol @ magic stick, that was funny. I hate the way Akane's informant made it seem like Kagura initiated the whole thing when it was Sesshomaru who came on to her! I feel for the poor girl. *Note to Akane: He's not taken if you're countries away from each other for most of the year!* She's such an evil person to have drugged Kagura and just left her. I don't see how Sesshomaru can even like her but I guess looks come before personality right?
Lol poor Sesshy got his balls scratched. Go Kagura! Take no shit from him! At least she stands up for herself despite being in love with him. She's a lot stronger than she thinks!
Great job :)
And for someone who is not so innocent herself, Akane sure keeps tabs on Sesshy. I just don'tget how she can get mad when she fucks around herself. Does she really expect him to stay hard & lonely while she fucks away in Switzerland? You've got the hottest guy around so it comes naturally.
*Throws herself at Sesshomaru*
Lol @ magic stick, that was funny. I hate the way Akane's informant made it seem like Kagura initiated the whole thing when it was Sesshomaru who came on to her! I feel for the poor girl. *Note to Akane: He's not taken if you're countries away from each other for most of the year!* She's such an evil person to have drugged Kagura and just left her. I don't see how Sesshomaru can even like her but I guess looks come before personality right?
Lol poor Sesshy got his balls scratched. Go Kagura! Take no shit from him! At least she stands up for herself despite being in love with him. She's a lot stronger than she thinks!
Great job :)
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Kagura got a letter...Dum Dum Dum! Lol @ chicken fuckers! This girl is too funny! She's none to pleased about it though. But they want her to be valedictorian which is a great honor considering she's a peasant amongst greatness! I don't blame her for her outburst and not believing them. I'd have a hard time believing it if I were in her shoes. Like, out of nowhere the people who never acknowledge you want you for such an honor. Though the whole pity thing is annoying, lol. Kagura doesn't need pity from anyone, nor will she accept it.
Mmm Muso, what can I say? Yura picked a good one, but a taken good one! Then again...so did Kagura, sort of. He is so sweet to Rachel. They seem perfect together. I feel a little bad for Yura because she likes him a lot but as of the moment she has no chance and they keep going back and forth with insults.
*Thinks to herself* If Garamaru has no power then why is he even in the room with them? Jealous bastard. He's hating just cuz every girl he has had or wanted preferred Sesshomaru! Who wouldn't prefer that sexy, golden-eyed, silver haired, hard-bodied...god of a man? Que bello! How cute that Garamaru brought up his own conclusion that Sess is just doing this cuz he's trying to fuck Kagura. Little does he know that Kagura would indeed allow Sess that priviledge willing, but not easily.
Lol @ I didn't sleep with Yokiro. The whole scene before Kagura even came in was hilarious. I like how he offered Akane back to Garamaru. Too funny! It sucks how he ignored Kagura though. At least acknowledge her, seeing as you keep coming on to her and leading her on...sort of. I'd be pissed too if I were her.
*Is shocked there's another woman who could make Akane seem like an angel. ROFLLLLLLL*
See Kaura, he comes on to you of his own free will, without being asked to, he does like you.
Sesshomaru can manhandle me any day....
Mmm Muso, what can I say? Yura picked a good one, but a taken good one! Then again...so did Kagura, sort of. He is so sweet to Rachel. They seem perfect together. I feel a little bad for Yura because she likes him a lot but as of the moment she has no chance and they keep going back and forth with insults.
*Thinks to herself* If Garamaru has no power then why is he even in the room with them? Jealous bastard. He's hating just cuz every girl he has had or wanted preferred Sesshomaru! Who wouldn't prefer that sexy, golden-eyed, silver haired, hard-bodied...god of a man? Que bello! How cute that Garamaru brought up his own conclusion that Sess is just doing this cuz he's trying to fuck Kagura. Little does he know that Kagura would indeed allow Sess that priviledge willing, but not easily.
Lol @ I didn't sleep with Yokiro. The whole scene before Kagura even came in was hilarious. I like how he offered Akane back to Garamaru. Too funny! It sucks how he ignored Kagura though. At least acknowledge her, seeing as you keep coming on to her and leading her on...sort of. I'd be pissed too if I were her.
*Is shocked there's another woman who could make Akane seem like an angel. ROFLLLLLLL*
See Kaura, he comes on to you of his own free will, without being asked to, he does like you.
Sesshomaru can manhandle me any day....
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What was Sesshomaru on? Little red riding hood? Big bad wolf? Roflllll. Psycho much? He came across really ooc there, but I like it! >:) *Gives Sesshy his reward*
I can see he will make it more than good for her when they have sex. She's already gotten a taste of his skilled fingers and by her reaction it must have been like heaven. Her crush of for years got her off by masturbating her! That's a fantasy most women can only dream of. *Jeff hardy are you out there?* I must say I loved the scene. (Such a perv I am reading these aff's. Oh well!) Seems he will find a girl who can please a man like him...and he'll be the one to teach her! I think he made her cum with his words alone. Very erotic *Blush*
“Come back little red riding hood…it’s not safe for a girl like you to be alone with the big bad wolf.” Roflll That would definitely wake me up out of my daze! The poor thing felt used :( God Sesshy is so hot!
Ohh they plotting against her, those bastards! Yikes @ use of digital camera & compromising position. They are so evil and all for nothing really!
Why didn't Sesshomaru want to be the valedictorian anymore? That I really don't get. But it's cool that they picked someone other than Garamaru. And oooh he's getting hard thinking about Kagura. Hehe
Lol @ Yura dragging Muso into the whole conversation. Geez she doesn't quit.
God it's really hard to read and review aff's with your Aunt coming in & out of the living room and looking over your shoulder from time to time, especially if you're playing a game while doing so. Kinda makes ya feel like a little kid instead of an adult! lol.
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I swear, this story is so good it seems like it's real!
I can see he will make it more than good for her when they have sex. She's already gotten a taste of his skilled fingers and by her reaction it must have been like heaven. Her crush of for years got her off by masturbating her! That's a fantasy most women can only dream of. *Jeff hardy are you out there?* I must say I loved the scene. (Such a perv I am reading these aff's. Oh well!) Seems he will find a girl who can please a man like him...and he'll be the one to teach her! I think he made her cum with his words alone. Very erotic *Blush*
“Come back little red riding hood…it’s not safe for a girl like you to be alone with the big bad wolf.” Roflll That would definitely wake me up out of my daze! The poor thing felt used :( God Sesshy is so hot!
Ohh they plotting against her, those bastards! Yikes @ use of digital camera & compromising position. They are so evil and all for nothing really!
Why didn't Sesshomaru want to be the valedictorian anymore? That I really don't get. But it's cool that they picked someone other than Garamaru. And oooh he's getting hard thinking about Kagura. Hehe
Lol @ Yura dragging Muso into the whole conversation. Geez she doesn't quit.
God it's really hard to read and review aff's with your Aunt coming in & out of the living room and looking over your shoulder from time to time, especially if you're playing a game while doing so. Kinda makes ya feel like a little kid instead of an adult! lol.
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I swear, this story is so good it seems like it's real!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok...I'm thinking I should have started from chap 1 and worked my way to chap 16 in reviewing instead of doing it backwards. But I wanted to review anyway, I know I'd like it if someone would review my stories no matter the order.
Lol. Tell me, is it not annoying when you think your story is good yet there's at least one or two reviewers telling you how you should have written it. It's called an imagination anf fanfiction for a reason right? Why should everything have to be accurate, right? I like it when fic aren't just only in the feudal times...I mean they are already set that way in the show, stories should like, be imaginative. Let them out of the past, you know, have some fun. Ok sorry for the babbling......
****On with the review****
Such drama in the Tashiotaka household. Toga's one mad dog! They brought it upon themselves on that one. I like how he punished Izayoi by spanking the hell out of her so she can't sit.
Geez is Akane the "head" mistress or something? Lol. They ended up doing things even though he wasn't up to it in the first place. She brings new meaning to the term "Cock-sucking whore"
Lol @ "rich boy" Could Kagura's bro make it any clearer he doesn't Sesshomaru? Hehe. I like the sound of the dress she made for Yura. The whole Muso/Yura convo was funny. He could not be any more clearer about the fact that he doesn't like her.
Aww, she can't keep her eyes off Sesshy. I guess he gets sick of all the women clinging to him. At least Kagura isn't all over him, though she loves him!
*Dips it low* Great use of the song, I love this song!
Gatenmaru is getting on my nerves. You gotta love it when they're so clueless that they keep trying. When will he see that she doesn't want him? That she only wants Sesshomaru...like every other girl. Insteresting how he can't take his eyes off the sight of Kagura and Gatenmaru dancing. (Do I detect a hint of green-eyed monster?)
Signs of a true crush: Kagura checking up on Sesshy's poor head. He's showing more interest than he thinks asking her to show him how to disarm an opponent at the dojo in his house. Nice pause in Sesshy's response when she questioned him about the invitation. "Because I want you..." "too" hehe he wants her more than he'd think!
Akane needs to butt out. I'm glad he didn't come to the party with her in tow. I can't imagine how Kagura would react to see them dancing together. (And I'm sure Akane would make it quite the turn-on for Sesshomaru!)
Gatenmaru is such an ass...if you like the girl don't try to rape her! And just because you know she doesn't have a boyfriend doesn't mean she's not interested in someone! I'm glad she kneed his dick, serves him right!
Yay Sesshy plays hero! He's so sweet ^o^ Nosy much @ him following and listening to them talk. And he doesn't like seeing Gatenmaru's hands on her because he wants her for himself, though he won't admit it. He sure gave Gatenmaru what he deserved but that locker room comment was uncalled for.
He kissed her! He kissed her! Let her fantasy begin....
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Sorry if I seem a little crazy in my reviews. I hope you don't think I'm flaming anything with the way I speak about some of the characters *cough* Akane *cough* because i'm not flaming at all. I looooooove loveeeeee this story! :)
Lol. Tell me, is it not annoying when you think your story is good yet there's at least one or two reviewers telling you how you should have written it. It's called an imagination anf fanfiction for a reason right? Why should everything have to be accurate, right? I like it when fic aren't just only in the feudal times...I mean they are already set that way in the show, stories should like, be imaginative. Let them out of the past, you know, have some fun. Ok sorry for the babbling......
****On with the review****
Such drama in the Tashiotaka household. Toga's one mad dog! They brought it upon themselves on that one. I like how he punished Izayoi by spanking the hell out of her so she can't sit.
Geez is Akane the "head" mistress or something? Lol. They ended up doing things even though he wasn't up to it in the first place. She brings new meaning to the term "Cock-sucking whore"
Lol @ "rich boy" Could Kagura's bro make it any clearer he doesn't Sesshomaru? Hehe. I like the sound of the dress she made for Yura. The whole Muso/Yura convo was funny. He could not be any more clearer about the fact that he doesn't like her.
Aww, she can't keep her eyes off Sesshy. I guess he gets sick of all the women clinging to him. At least Kagura isn't all over him, though she loves him!
*Dips it low* Great use of the song, I love this song!
Gatenmaru is getting on my nerves. You gotta love it when they're so clueless that they keep trying. When will he see that she doesn't want him? That she only wants Sesshomaru...like every other girl. Insteresting how he can't take his eyes off the sight of Kagura and Gatenmaru dancing. (Do I detect a hint of green-eyed monster?)
Signs of a true crush: Kagura checking up on Sesshy's poor head. He's showing more interest than he thinks asking her to show him how to disarm an opponent at the dojo in his house. Nice pause in Sesshy's response when she questioned him about the invitation. "Because I want you..." "too" hehe he wants her more than he'd think!
Akane needs to butt out. I'm glad he didn't come to the party with her in tow. I can't imagine how Kagura would react to see them dancing together. (And I'm sure Akane would make it quite the turn-on for Sesshomaru!)
Gatenmaru is such an ass...if you like the girl don't try to rape her! And just because you know she doesn't have a boyfriend doesn't mean she's not interested in someone! I'm glad she kneed his dick, serves him right!
Yay Sesshy plays hero! He's so sweet ^o^ Nosy much @ him following and listening to them talk. And he doesn't like seeing Gatenmaru's hands on her because he wants her for himself, though he won't admit it. He sure gave Gatenmaru what he deserved but that locker room comment was uncalled for.
He kissed her! He kissed her! Let her fantasy begin....
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Sorry if I seem a little crazy in my reviews. I hope you don't think I'm flaming anything with the way I speak about some of the characters *cough* Akane *cough* because i'm not flaming at all. I looooooove loveeeeee this story! :)
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Temper Temper Toga! So much for their civilized dinner. Lol daddy's pissed, time to make yourselves scarce. Rofl @ Rin wanting to see Izayoi and Aknae fight. Very clear that no one truly likes her.
I like how Sesshomaru just left that bitch where she was and was in his room before she realized it. Glad he manhandled her, she deserves pain for trying to slap him. But what an interesting position she ended up in. >:) She should have stayed her ass home instead of coming over unannounced and starting shit! Quite jealous for someone who has other lovers herself. And come on Sesshy you know you really don't care about her and vice versa or she would transfer to your school and you'd be a REAL couple, other than just sexually!
And I reiterate: Cock-sucking whore!
Did Toga truly expect Izayoi to be where he asked her to be? Come on now! And Inuyasha's too much.
Hehe! Muso's getting in on the action. I really like how sweet he is with rachel. Every boyfriend should treat his girl nicely!
I feel Kagura's pain, dress shopping is a bitch!! But it pales in comparison to swimsuit shopping! Hey there's an idea for you if you haven't already got it. Whenever Sess & Kagura start having sex...they should do it in a pool. I know! I know! So unsanitary but who cares, it's a story, lol. Just a thought. But of course since Yura made her try the dress it would be slutty. Seems like she really wanted to make Kagura look the part of a whore. LOL.
“This will not do, Kagura. How do you expect to make clothes for the mass public, but you can’t even dress yourself?” -- Yura made an excellent point, but of course Kagura would make better clothes for everyone else than she would for herself. She's just not that kind of girl. More confident than she knows.
BTW: Not only do I love this story but I love the chapter names as well.
I like how Sesshomaru just left that bitch where she was and was in his room before she realized it. Glad he manhandled her, she deserves pain for trying to slap him. But what an interesting position she ended up in. >:) She should have stayed her ass home instead of coming over unannounced and starting shit! Quite jealous for someone who has other lovers herself. And come on Sesshy you know you really don't care about her and vice versa or she would transfer to your school and you'd be a REAL couple, other than just sexually!
And I reiterate: Cock-sucking whore!
Did Toga truly expect Izayoi to be where he asked her to be? Come on now! And Inuyasha's too much.
Hehe! Muso's getting in on the action. I really like how sweet he is with rachel. Every boyfriend should treat his girl nicely!
I feel Kagura's pain, dress shopping is a bitch!! But it pales in comparison to swimsuit shopping! Hey there's an idea for you if you haven't already got it. Whenever Sess & Kagura start having sex...they should do it in a pool. I know! I know! So unsanitary but who cares, it's a story, lol. Just a thought. But of course since Yura made her try the dress it would be slutty. Seems like she really wanted to make Kagura look the part of a whore. LOL.
“This will not do, Kagura. How do you expect to make clothes for the mass public, but you can’t even dress yourself?” -- Yura made an excellent point, but of course Kagura would make better clothes for everyone else than she would for herself. She's just not that kind of girl. More confident than she knows.
BTW: Not only do I love this story but I love the chapter names as well.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the last review saying anon (The one that begins with Temper Temper Toga but look on the bright side, ya got another review, lol. Sorry!). I forgot to put my name & email. (Dumb of me) Will review the rest of the chaps l8r or tomorrow since aunt keeps coming in and looking over my shoulder. It would be too odd if she knew I read these, even though i'm not a kid or anything.
Anyways EXCELLENT STORY
Anyways EXCELLENT STORY
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And another chapter of Heartless...this is good..
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was almost gonna make an account just to be able to review this story. I absolutely love it!! I found myself checking like every day to see if there was an update...that's how addicted I am! I really want to wring Akane's neck...god she's such a bitch! I can't believe he'd consider marrying her. Sure she's rich and obviously a good fuck but if that's all there is he can find another. I mean, he's gotta consider the fact that his family doesn't care for her very much, him putting family above money & power. Glad he broke up with her for now. Lol, the poor boy can surely find a better girl that will fuck & suck him right! Lol, but I know this is a SessKag fic not SessAkane. (Glomps Sesshy earning a glare from Kagura and other fangirls.) I'm loving Sesshy's character although he's more of an asshole in this. He's so sexy though. I can't wait till chapter 17, and to know what happens on their trip. Anyways I think this story is excellent and keeps me wanting more! Lol for a girl who said she wasn't a writer, Tabatha you're doing damn good on this story! Keep it up, hun. BTW do you do those email alert things for your fans? And hope you enjoyed your trip.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, frined, i very, very sad when i conclude you no finished this fic...
Oh, please!
Oh, please!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh!
I NEED the end!!! Please! You cannot let us at this point! I really want an end!!!
I NEED the end!!! Please! You cannot let us at this point! I really want an end!!!