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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol go Kagura!! Show that meanie who's boss. Sesshy didn't have to be so rude to her she was only concerned! I thought she really poured the wine over his head but it was her daydreaming? Lol. That would have been interesting though. After his treatment I'd wanna strangle him too. Rin is on to something....:)
I didn't know scholarships were a bad thing. And here I was thinking they were helpful, hehe. Their family dinners are so hilarious. I loved Rin's reaction to the whole Akane talk. I mean, how bad do you have to be for a little girl not to like you? That has to say a lot. Would Sesshy, being the family man he is, really want a real relationship with a girl said family can't stand? It's gotta be in the back of his mind. (Bear with me, I know I"m repeating myself a lot in these reviews. I think to much.)
Sesshy is one slick bastard, lol, offering her a ride home. When did he become so sweet and caring? He's so wrong in his thinking, Kagura knows she's a peasant and not 'one of them'! At least she got $100 out of it as well. Kagura really needs a cell phone! I really hope all that happens (and has happened) in the later chapters isn't just part of him 'putting her in her place'. It would be kinda sad to know he was toying with her, though she's playing her own game as well.
Bravo @ her having some balls and asking him out for ice cream. Yummy!!!! Though it would have gone better had his mind not been occupied by his slut! I liked that he at least kept his word to drive her home and walk her to the door (all that was missing was a goodnight kiss!) but what he said to her brothers as he left was so wrong. It's not like she begged him for a ride or anything, he offered, more like forced!
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I didn't know scholarships were a bad thing. And here I was thinking they were helpful, hehe. Their family dinners are so hilarious. I loved Rin's reaction to the whole Akane talk. I mean, how bad do you have to be for a little girl not to like you? That has to say a lot. Would Sesshy, being the family man he is, really want a real relationship with a girl said family can't stand? It's gotta be in the back of his mind. (Bear with me, I know I"m repeating myself a lot in these reviews. I think to much.)
Sesshy is one slick bastard, lol, offering her a ride home. When did he become so sweet and caring? He's so wrong in his thinking, Kagura knows she's a peasant and not 'one of them'! At least she got $100 out of it as well. Kagura really needs a cell phone! I really hope all that happens (and has happened) in the later chapters isn't just part of him 'putting her in her place'. It would be kinda sad to know he was toying with her, though she's playing her own game as well.
Bravo @ her having some balls and asking him out for ice cream. Yummy!!!! Though it would have gone better had his mind not been occupied by his slut! I liked that he at least kept his word to drive her home and walk her to the door (all that was missing was a goodnight kiss!) but what he said to her brothers as he left was so wrong. It's not like she begged him for a ride or anything, he offered, more like forced!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oohh she gets her crush's family's table tonight. Fate really smiled on her :)
Koga is such a perv in this. Another epitome of superficiality. (I actually used to like his character in the anime but then he just got annoying! How many times can you possesively claim someone, unrequitedly I might add, before it gets annoying? I shocked Kagome didn't put a sit command on him too! Wouldn't that be so funny?) The whole time he's 'talking' with "Yumi" he's leering at her and thinking pervy thoughts. Creepy! Very predator of him! A true wolf, lol. I thought it was nice he offered to escort her...even though he's just trying to fuck her!
Lol @ Ayame. I like how it's him after her instead of the other way around. Let him see for once how it feels to want a girl who has no interest in him (*cough* Kagome? anime? *cough*)
So Akane really is his fiancee? When was this established? Betcha she more decided it then he did. Oh wait Inu was getting back at Sesshy. (Very dumb of me. Like he'll really marry someone he won't sleep with. Hopefully ya have a good laugh at some of my reviews.) Sesshy shouldn't be so rude at her concern for him...what an ass! It's not like she's Manten and going to spread it around that she saw him coughing!
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Koga is such a perv in this. Another epitome of superficiality. (I actually used to like his character in the anime but then he just got annoying! How many times can you possesively claim someone, unrequitedly I might add, before it gets annoying? I shocked Kagome didn't put a sit command on him too! Wouldn't that be so funny?) The whole time he's 'talking' with "Yumi" he's leering at her and thinking pervy thoughts. Creepy! Very predator of him! A true wolf, lol. I thought it was nice he offered to escort her...even though he's just trying to fuck her!
Lol @ Ayame. I like how it's him after her instead of the other way around. Let him see for once how it feels to want a girl who has no interest in him (*cough* Kagome? anime? *cough*)
So Akane really is his fiancee? When was this established? Betcha she more decided it then he did. Oh wait Inu was getting back at Sesshy. (Very dumb of me. Like he'll really marry someone he won't sleep with. Hopefully ya have a good laugh at some of my reviews.) Sesshy shouldn't be so rude at her concern for him...what an ass! It's not like she's Manten and going to spread it around that she saw him coughing!
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GREAT JOB. LOVE THE STORY/CHAPS. Ya got a real fan here :)
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like they way Sesshy and Koga treat women as just sex objects. And it is disgusting that they trade. (Vomits at any thought of Jaken getting any.) Words spoken out of true love: "If he finds the right woman he will change." I agree with Kagura there! But right now, he's an ass.
I looked up that little french phrase you used. "Le Petit Mort" translated to "The Dead Baby or the Small death" So he enjoys making his bed partners experience the dead baby or the small death? (Lol the translations sites suck! But I know what you were getting at, lol. Basically he makes it damn good! Sorry I was just curious as to the meaning. I thought it would be something different than what I actually found.)
Is it just mean or does it seem that Yura actually put the thought of losing her virginity before leaving in her head? Kagura didn't seem to be thinking about that until Yura brought it up. Poor thing! She loves him...! Well Yura put it straight up "Don't expect him to fall and no regrets." At least she meantioned Akane to Kagura...sort of a forewarning but not really. But at least Yura is a good and true friend to Kagura. I like how she looks out for her and even though it's a bad idea, will let her learn for herself by helping her with the Sesshomaru situation.
Lol Izayoi mentioned running into Akane on purpose to get on Toga's nerve and shock Sesshomaru. It sure worked! And I didn't know 17-year olds were allowed to drink. Then again, Japanese customs & laws are very different from American ones.
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I looked up that little french phrase you used. "Le Petit Mort" translated to "The Dead Baby or the Small death" So he enjoys making his bed partners experience the dead baby or the small death? (Lol the translations sites suck! But I know what you were getting at, lol. Basically he makes it damn good! Sorry I was just curious as to the meaning. I thought it would be something different than what I actually found.)
Is it just mean or does it seem that Yura actually put the thought of losing her virginity before leaving in her head? Kagura didn't seem to be thinking about that until Yura brought it up. Poor thing! She loves him...! Well Yura put it straight up "Don't expect him to fall and no regrets." At least she meantioned Akane to Kagura...sort of a forewarning but not really. But at least Yura is a good and true friend to Kagura. I like how she looks out for her and even though it's a bad idea, will let her learn for herself by helping her with the Sesshomaru situation.
Lol Izayoi mentioned running into Akane on purpose to get on Toga's nerve and shock Sesshomaru. It sure worked! And I didn't know 17-year olds were allowed to drink. Then again, Japanese customs & laws are very different from American ones.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alas I've come to the final (should have been first) review, until the next update anyway. It's been fun :)
Jaken fucks up the flow in the group, lol. He's the odd man out in the whole trio. Oooh Sesshy is sooo sexxxxxxy. I love the desription of Koga's eyes. Sapphire is a beautiful color :) Like I said, Jaken fucks it all up. You're right, all the money in the world couldn't help that one! And what an interesting conversation they are having...about some slut Sesshy banged! I can tell deep down Sesshomaru does not really like the women throwing themselves at him. (Well he does but you know what I mean, right?) "Once I made her cum the third time" - damn is he THAT good? lol. He must be! Lol @ Jaken you can have her when I'm done.
Aww don't be so down on yourself Kagura. I don't blame her though, I always felt sick to my stomach and down on myself everytime I saw a crush with another girl. Hey Kagura, it's better to be smart and poor than dumb and rich. (Though the money would help!) :-) You will make it big Kagura!!! Lol.
Eww @ Jaken will need a date. Kagura may be a peasant but even she's to pretty for Jaken! *Slaps Koga for that one* For a virgin, Yura does act kinda slutty, hehe. Jaken's got some nerve, he's no one to talk about someone being ugly when he gets no play whatsoever. He's probably a virgin himself. I liked Sesshomaru's sort of evealuation for Kagura, well up until the doggy-style comment. At least he doesn't think she's unattractive? There may be hope for her yet....
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Finally done with the back reviewing. Again sorry I did it all backwards but I hadn't realized till the update chapter that anonymous reviews were accepted, otherwise it would have been done the right way. (I really would have made an account to review if they weren't though.) Just letting ya know I've really enjoyed your story so far and I'm truly glad you didn't forget about it or give up on it. Since you mentioned it's a two parter I can tell it will be long and chock full of fun! (LOVE THE STORY/ CHAPS)
Till the next update
~ sesshysdarkkitten ~
Jaken fucks up the flow in the group, lol. He's the odd man out in the whole trio. Oooh Sesshy is sooo sexxxxxxy. I love the desription of Koga's eyes. Sapphire is a beautiful color :) Like I said, Jaken fucks it all up. You're right, all the money in the world couldn't help that one! And what an interesting conversation they are having...about some slut Sesshy banged! I can tell deep down Sesshomaru does not really like the women throwing themselves at him. (Well he does but you know what I mean, right?) "Once I made her cum the third time" - damn is he THAT good? lol. He must be! Lol @ Jaken you can have her when I'm done.
Aww don't be so down on yourself Kagura. I don't blame her though, I always felt sick to my stomach and down on myself everytime I saw a crush with another girl. Hey Kagura, it's better to be smart and poor than dumb and rich. (Though the money would help!) :-) You will make it big Kagura!!! Lol.
Eww @ Jaken will need a date. Kagura may be a peasant but even she's to pretty for Jaken! *Slaps Koga for that one* For a virgin, Yura does act kinda slutty, hehe. Jaken's got some nerve, he's no one to talk about someone being ugly when he gets no play whatsoever. He's probably a virgin himself. I liked Sesshomaru's sort of evealuation for Kagura, well up until the doggy-style comment. At least he doesn't think she's unattractive? There may be hope for her yet....
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Finally done with the back reviewing. Again sorry I did it all backwards but I hadn't realized till the update chapter that anonymous reviews were accepted, otherwise it would have been done the right way. (I really would have made an account to review if they weren't though.) Just letting ya know I've really enjoyed your story so far and I'm truly glad you didn't forget about it or give up on it. Since you mentioned it's a two parter I can tell it will be long and chock full of fun! (LOVE THE STORY/ CHAPS)
Till the next update
~ sesshysdarkkitten ~
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol poor Inuyasha...forced to retrieve his elder, sexy, gorgeous brother. Very Marsha Brady of him when he said "Oww my nose!" I like how Toga referred to Akane as a distraction but it's funny how she can manage to be one when she's away for most of the year. I'm not defending her or anything, just making a point. Rio de Janeiro sounds like a beautiful place for Sesshy to go, but it's understandable why Izayoi isn't approving of the idea. I thought the whole "Mommy is Sesshy a prick? What's a prick?" thing from Rin was sooo hilarious. But did they really need to ask where she learned that from? It's obvios that Mr. foul mouth himself said it around her. The grounding was a bit unfair though Inu really needs to watch his mouth, at least around his little sis.
So much for a civilized dinner! Akane screwed that up and Izayoi didn't help, either. Izayoi is too much though, she doesn't like Akane, yet she made a place for her at the table to join them. I really don't like how she came over unannounced like she owns the place or lives there. Just because he wasn't in the mood for a date or feeling well doesn't mean she should have just popped over without asking. What did Akane mean by "It depends"? It was too funny how Izayoi was sort of defending Akane. (How do you pronounce Akane? I know it's probably a stupid question but I thought I'd ask anyway.) But she was sooo wrong to bring up Kagura, lol. She had to know Akane would get on Sesshy for that. But Akane dares to raise her voice at the great Sesshomaru??
Poor Yura never gives up. I love how Muso has been faithful with the same girl since 7th grade...how sweeeet! :) That's true love right there! Yura should be happy to know he's not a cheater, instead of saying "Dammit!" Monogamy is a good thing! And I don't blame Kagura for not really liking the idea of Yura and Muso. I know I wouldn't really want any of my friends dating my brother (though he's only 14 so that'll never happen!)
Love this story!!!!!! (Sorry for the backwards reviewing!)
So much for a civilized dinner! Akane screwed that up and Izayoi didn't help, either. Izayoi is too much though, she doesn't like Akane, yet she made a place for her at the table to join them. I really don't like how she came over unannounced like she owns the place or lives there. Just because he wasn't in the mood for a date or feeling well doesn't mean she should have just popped over without asking. What did Akane mean by "It depends"? It was too funny how Izayoi was sort of defending Akane. (How do you pronounce Akane? I know it's probably a stupid question but I thought I'd ask anyway.) But she was sooo wrong to bring up Kagura, lol. She had to know Akane would get on Sesshy for that. But Akane dares to raise her voice at the great Sesshomaru??
Poor Yura never gives up. I love how Muso has been faithful with the same girl since 7th grade...how sweeeet! :) That's true love right there! Yura should be happy to know he's not a cheater, instead of saying "Dammit!" Monogamy is a good thing! And I don't blame Kagura for not really liking the idea of Yura and Muso. I know I wouldn't really want any of my friends dating my brother (though he's only 14 so that'll never happen!)
Love this story!!!!!! (Sorry for the backwards reviewing!)
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh Sess in the shower! *drool* >:) I'd love to watch him...! I love the whole floyd thing, that was really funny. I dunno why Gatenmaru would ever call Sesshy floyd when the girls all want to fuck Sess.
Naraku is really sweet and caring when it comes to Kagura...all a big brother should be. He's so sweet to give her some of his winnings to go shopping for the party. Kagura needs a cell phone so that she will always get Yura's messages. I agree with Naraku, Muso probably would have deleted it, which would have been fucked up of him. But at the same time, his overprotectiveness is sweet, at least he cares. Shopping is fun!!!!!
Aww poor Sesshy, he got a boo-boo :( Headaches are no joke! Suckes for him that now everyone will know what happened, but on the bright side, maybe some of the school whores will want to help *wink wink* Well if ya want something spread around really fast, just tell Manten! Lol temper temper Sesshy. I don't blame him, I'd wanna break my phone to if I had a huge headache and wanted to relax and it kept ringing. He could've just turned the damn thing off though. I think it's sweet that Izayoi sang him to sleep. He's more child like than ya think!
DumDumDum Yura reveals the man she wants to give her virginity to. Lol Kagura's reaction was too funny. I can't believe she thought it was Naraku at first...ewww! (Well he is kinda handsome but in a creepy psycho way)
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Naraku is really sweet and caring when it comes to Kagura...all a big brother should be. He's so sweet to give her some of his winnings to go shopping for the party. Kagura needs a cell phone so that she will always get Yura's messages. I agree with Naraku, Muso probably would have deleted it, which would have been fucked up of him. But at the same time, his overprotectiveness is sweet, at least he cares. Shopping is fun!!!!!
Aww poor Sesshy, he got a boo-boo :( Headaches are no joke! Suckes for him that now everyone will know what happened, but on the bright side, maybe some of the school whores will want to help *wink wink* Well if ya want something spread around really fast, just tell Manten! Lol temper temper Sesshy. I don't blame him, I'd wanna break my phone to if I had a huge headache and wanted to relax and it kept ringing. He could've just turned the damn thing off though. I think it's sweet that Izayoi sang him to sleep. He's more child like than ya think!
DumDumDum Yura reveals the man she wants to give her virginity to. Lol Kagura's reaction was too funny. I can't believe she thought it was Naraku at first...ewww! (Well he is kinda handsome but in a creepy psycho way)
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ewww @ Muso's partner. I can't stand dirty old men, so disgusting. (The younger ones are better...lol well not too young. Muso this is Yura, Yura this is Muso! Muso- "eww" Yura- "Ooh he's hot" I think I put it simply, don't ya think? lol. But while Inderstand he doesn't like her, he still should have helped her up and tried to be nice - you know, like grin-and-bear-it?
I like how Izayoi writes eroticas. What a cute way to find out someone knows...at your youngest child's school, from a teacher no less. And despite her not telling him, I have a feeling Toga already knows about the eroticas.
How cool! Kagura is lucky that she got Totosai to spar with her. And how cute @ Naraku braiding her hair. lol @ "doggy got to behave" Interesting how Sesshomaru and Totosai were reminded of the same person with Kagura's stance.
Naraku is soo slick, betting on Kagura and Sesshomaru sparring. And he didn't even know he was fighting her. I know she must have loved seeing him in his armor. Sesshy lost to a girl! Sesshy lost to a girl! lol. Funny how finding out you're facing a girl, especially Kagura, can slightly distract ya. I feel bad for him though, she nailed his head really hard. What a stroke to Kagura's ego to have beaten one of the best and a blow to Sesshy's. But aww, all she can think about is concern for him.
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I like how Izayoi writes eroticas. What a cute way to find out someone knows...at your youngest child's school, from a teacher no less. And despite her not telling him, I have a feeling Toga already knows about the eroticas.
How cool! Kagura is lucky that she got Totosai to spar with her. And how cute @ Naraku braiding her hair. lol @ "doggy got to behave" Interesting how Sesshomaru and Totosai were reminded of the same person with Kagura's stance.
Naraku is soo slick, betting on Kagura and Sesshomaru sparring. And he didn't even know he was fighting her. I know she must have loved seeing him in his armor. Sesshy lost to a girl! Sesshy lost to a girl! lol. Funny how finding out you're facing a girl, especially Kagura, can slightly distract ya. I feel bad for him though, she nailed his head really hard. What a stroke to Kagura's ego to have beaten one of the best and a blow to Sesshy's. But aww, all she can think about is concern for him.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm ramen!!!! It's not a bad breakfast though it can get annoying! Lol Izayoi woke up on the wrong side of the Toga this morning.
It must make Akane feel like such a whore that Sesshomaru won't sleep in the same bed with her after sex. Haha! Why does miss sleeps around when she's abroad need an informant anyway?...it's not like she's very monogamus. But her conversation with the informant was pretty funny. It's not like she doesn't know most women want "her man"!
While most people would never want to catch their parent or parents in the act, Sesshomaru begs to differ. A little weird but he does learn more, uh tips from watching. Hence, the whipped cream thought.
*Earth to Naraku* Of course she likes Sesshomaru. Duh! It's a good thing she didn't tell them she wanted to lose her innocence to Sess, they'd probably hang him. And muso has the most perverted chauvanist partner in the world. Ewww!
It must make Akane feel like such a whore that Sesshomaru won't sleep in the same bed with her after sex. Haha! Why does miss sleeps around when she's abroad need an informant anyway?...it's not like she's very monogamus. But her conversation with the informant was pretty funny. It's not like she doesn't know most women want "her man"!
While most people would never want to catch their parent or parents in the act, Sesshomaru begs to differ. A little weird but he does learn more, uh tips from watching. Hence, the whipped cream thought.
*Earth to Naraku* Of course she likes Sesshomaru. Duh! It's a good thing she didn't tell them she wanted to lose her innocence to Sess, they'd probably hang him. And muso has the most perverted chauvanist partner in the world. Ewww!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh a doggy! Lol let me stop. Lol @ Sesshy climbing a tree, taking a page from Inuyasha, I see.. I love lemons! *Gawks at Sesshy stripping* I enjoyed the lemon. She should have let him do the foreplay, he obviosly likes to! I'm glad he's being safe about it though, with the condom and all! We wouldn't want our beautiful Sesshy to catch something from his slut now would we? Judging by Akane's reaction, he must be incredible in bed! (As if he'd be anything less than so)
Aww Kagura, don't contemplate Sesshomaru's actions, it'll only confuse you more! Love how Naraku and Muso are referred to as the Spanish Inquisition. Just two good big brothers worrying about their sister, nothing more, nothing less. (Yeah right!) I do think they should let her make her own mistakes though. She's a strong girl and she'll figure out what's right on her own. I feel bad for her, I know what it's like to have an unrequited crush and think you're in love with him.
And damn Sesshy can last! Wow, they went at it like rabbits! He must have been really in the mood. They do have a weird relationship. Seems like a borderline open-relationship consisting of mostly sex! Lol Sesshy's worried about a hickey, come on look at him, women want to fuck him regardless. And even after sex he's still energetic, though they fucked all night. Amazing! Go Sesshy, that thought alone is enough to keep a fangirl happy...even in a fic. I wonder why he won't sleep with the women afterwards, must be an emotions thing (though he has none!) or just a male thing.
Toga and Izayoi are a comical pair. Too funny at her reaction to being caught by Sesshomaru. Lol! Obviously Toga doesn't like Akane, but he'll like Kagura who has a mouth on her at times. :) I like...whipped cream!
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Aww Kagura, don't contemplate Sesshomaru's actions, it'll only confuse you more! Love how Naraku and Muso are referred to as the Spanish Inquisition. Just two good big brothers worrying about their sister, nothing more, nothing less. (Yeah right!) I do think they should let her make her own mistakes though. She's a strong girl and she'll figure out what's right on her own. I feel bad for her, I know what it's like to have an unrequited crush and think you're in love with him.
And damn Sesshy can last! Wow, they went at it like rabbits! He must have been really in the mood. They do have a weird relationship. Seems like a borderline open-relationship consisting of mostly sex! Lol Sesshy's worried about a hickey, come on look at him, women want to fuck him regardless. And even after sex he's still energetic, though they fucked all night. Amazing! Go Sesshy, that thought alone is enough to keep a fangirl happy...even in a fic. I wonder why he won't sleep with the women afterwards, must be an emotions thing (though he has none!) or just a male thing.
Toga and Izayoi are a comical pair. Too funny at her reaction to being caught by Sesshomaru. Lol! Obviously Toga doesn't like Akane, but he'll like Kagura who has a mouth on her at times. :) I like...whipped cream!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I know i'm going backwards with the reviews, lol. I wonder what will happen when they find out who drugged Kagura. And yes Akane, you are no saint either! The fact that Sesshy felt slight jealousy that Kagura didn't harm Gatenmaru for touching her shows that he likes her more than he'd ever let on. 'So much for a crush' (aww i felt bad for him) A part of me is surprised he didn't ask Akane to go with him to the festival or even tell her about it, but the other part isn't because he knows Rin doesn't like her! Which makes him considerate! (Am I reading to much into it?) lol anyways great story :)