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for Making Things Right

by inufan625

person lithium88
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap!! sry. heh... i just finished reading chapters 18-20! ^_^ they're really good! that was a twist i never really expected. this story is turning out to be really good!!!! glad u're updating so often, can't wait to see where it goes and how it ends!! keep up the fantastic work! ^_^ t.c. bye
lith*
person gina
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!! absolutly fantastic!!! i love this story.. i found yseterday read it all the way through.... i love it!!!!! one of the best i have read!!!! i can't wait for more!!! =)
person lithium88
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi there.. *sigh* just barely got the chance to read all the new chapters u've posted up!! busy week. anyway!!! i love where this is going, and i can't wait to see wat happens with miroku and sango ^_^ they're so cute. also, lovin the whole inuyasha/kagome relationship! *grins* it's a great story!! update soon!! t.c. bye
lith*
person lithium88
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh..i think i just reviewed for chapter 13 o_O, but now this 'review' goes out to chapter 14. awesome chapter!!! but of course... they always are. ^_^!!! anyway i'm glad that u're updating much more often now!!!! thank u for sharing this kickass story with everyone!!! *dances...trips* damnit! *ahem* sry.. anyway it's coming along beautifully. update soon... again haha *grins* t.c. bye
lith*
person lithium88
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!! love where it's going, good work!!!!! keep updating, i'll keep reviewing! ^_^ pants-defyingly sweet!
lith*
person beccapatty
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG That was sooooooooooo saddd! I cried and cried.. u had Shippo jump in front of Kagome and get ripped apart saving her.. and everyone else omg it was sooooo sad! sooo sooo goood but horribly.. if u plan on ending this story sad like that i will have to stop now! i cant handle it.. i hope they all live happily ever after eventually. and omg what are the others gonna think .. They are prolly gonna thank Kagome forever.. she gave them all a chance at a new life and destroyed Naraku and got their revenge.. then died afterwards. but she also had to witness EVERYONE get horribly murdered by Naraku sooo sadd! anyways keep up the gr8 work and plz update soon!
person lithium88
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.....*at loss for words* i..wow! those 2 chapters were so emotionally charged. they were written beautifully. i hope u keep updating!! i'll be waiting!!! and once again... great job, hah.. during the battle and everyone dying.. i even felt sadness *tear* love ur story! ^_^
lith*
person KitKat
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sobs* its *sniff* BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! This has to be the best fanfic i've read so far although confusing at times I am deeply inpressed by your writings!!! *bows* I am hummbled to have ever read your work. ^_^


~KitKat (Passion angel) I LUV YOU STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shanazel
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh the plot thickens!! I am really enjoying this story :)
person lithium88
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! *faints* love ur story!! i stumbled upon it today and decided to have a look. once i started reading thou, i couldn't stop. it's a very intriging and captivating story. i like the way u potray the characters and scenarios throughout the story. (sry for reviewing 10 chapters into ur story, just found it today!) well anyway, i love ur story, it's a different outlook on the whole series/manga, i like it! i can't wait to read on and find out what happens next. keep updating and i will keep reading, thnx!! ^_^ bye!!
lith*