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Mmmmm very pretty story, I had a very good time reading it. Congratulations for your writing, your two Inuyashas were fabulous, very different and very as I would have imagine both..... And the top of all : Inuyasha having three "first time", yeah !

From a french mommy and reader,

Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth

Good story still saw minor spelling errors 1 ever 3 chapters. I still noticed you never mentioned shippo, Mirkou or Sango again. I believe if you would have gone in to some more detail the story would have mad at least 40 chapters. I still thought it was great and i keep reading what you write.

this was a great story and i loved it.

I just wanted to tell you that I love your stories they are awesome and I have read them all and thanks for sharing with us. (Falls down and worships inufan625) We are not worthy to be in your greatness heehee sorry couldn't help myself.

I just read ch 12 and I have to say somthing. you are one hell of a writer. I cried, I actually cried. I dont cry. I laughed durring titanic, and sleep durring chic flicks, and read sad novels with inderfence. I'm just damn impressed, I know the characters and much from this story is taken from inuyasha, but you should seriously consider writing professionally. I read on this sight to pass the time because Im a house wife, and I read way to fast to buy a book a day.. I didnt expect to come across somthing, dare I say, Good in a professional sense. Wow.

Amber

I don't really know what to say. But I do know this story made me happy, and it also made me cry. It's one of the best stories I have ever read.

I really enjoyed this story. While Kagome got a slight power-up it was more in control and you mentioned that her real importance lay in binding the group together. (I loathe power-up Kagome stories.) Not sure I followed the whole explanation of what they were all doing in the modern times but that was OK.

I did wonder why Kouga never reappeared after making the deal with Inuyasha and never got his memories. from Kagome. I don't really like the canon Kouga but he was there at the end of Naraku so I sort of assumed he would come back into the story as an ally.

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u got my votes in thes 2(IN ORDER)

this is one of the best stories that i have read in quite awhile
you had me hooked from the begining to the very end
i look forward to reading ur next story and i hope that you never stop writing
good luck with all ur future stories and i hope they all come out as well as this one did
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Just finished reading and enjoyed every min
Thanks so much for sharing.

As far as your other fics they all sound interesting I would go with the one that has the most written then you can work on the others as you have time or ispiration and start posting the one that has the most ready when you are finished with the current one. I look forward to your next project whatever it may be.