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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww.. this is really good. I hope you update a.s.a.p. PLEASE!!!
thanks,
~Dream Girl
thanks,
~Dream Girl
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You added a chap! Brilliant!
Loved it just like the previous ones.
Loved it just like the previous ones.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, its pretty good, i haven't finished it ywt, but i just had to mention this, there is this one part in the story when they are walking through the woods...
Want to sit down for awhile?” she asked. I put Kagome down carefully and spread out her “sleeping bag” which had been stowed away in the backpack.
she said SIT!!! he would have had to sit. =0 lol, sorry, i just spotted it and had to point it out. i have no idea if anyone else did, or not, but i jsut had to.
Want to sit down for awhile?” she asked. I put Kagome down carefully and spread out her “sleeping bag” which had been stowed away in the backpack.
she said SIT!!! he would have had to sit. =0 lol, sorry, i just spotted it and had to point it out. i have no idea if anyone else did, or not, but i jsut had to.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey hey hey! that was cool make a sequel i think that would be cool or one wen he just gets up and leaves completely u giv great detalil i like that
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thia is so sad but good iam crying just thinking about it please up date soon i want to now what happins will he regekt her or will he forgive her i hope its the last on
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it was pretty good.I dont mean anything negative by it but the characters seemed a little not themselves and very emotional but good job anyway.^_^
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM ASKING YOU FROMN THE BOTOM OF MY HEART TO KEEP GOING THIS IS A GRAET STORY
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the stories but i think you need to add another chapter prety-please. on a scale of 1-10 i give you a 1,000,000,000,000
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think he went too far when he made that crack about her goin through the whole pack after kouga.