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for Osuwari, Little Brother

by HimeAndi

person Kags
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good I hope that you update soon
person Lilmab207
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story alot and I can't wait til you update!!!!1
person jade
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was pretty yummy. but a few parts were a little dubious.
person Skittles the Sugar Fairy
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing! I love how you portray Sesshomaru and Inuyasha! PLease continue this story!
person Shivawn
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story is just too hot for it's own good! I WAS BLUSHING ALMOST ALL THE WAY THROUGH CHAPTER 3 TO 5! Man, this is so hot...and very, very good! I love how you have SesshoMaru have slight guilt-pangs and then he pushes them aside, for an excuse of 'exacting revenge.' Whenever SesshoMaru feels the pangs of guilt in his chest, I feel them and I almost want to cry! POOR INU-BABY! ::cries:: I hope SesshoMaru takes InuYasha kind of forcefully (InuYasha pisses SesshoMaru off or something and SesshoMaru takes it out on InuYasha during rough sex) ;) If he takes Inu forcefully, he may feel even more guilt and a guilty SesshoMaru is always hot! I love the detail you put into the story. I can picture everything clearly in my mind like it was a movie!
person Rawben
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh. goood. lol, great concept! change the rosary. nice.
person Dante
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great update. You did a great job detailing the kissing; almost forgot to breathe while I was reading that. Keep it up.

D_
person Princess Sin
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah, imagine my exctiment when there three chapters up. and they were better
than i hoped for.
person Onyxlight
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boy is this ever getting complex...I like and was ever so pleased to find you had posted 3 chappies at one time

YAY!!
person blacknoise
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGagerv abvjekabvjldvleav ohnoes!!!!!11!!!!one

That's so damn good, it reduced me to petty fangirlisms. It's emotional, it's gripping, it's WELL WRITTEN, and it's IN CHARACTER. I think I love you.