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Next chapter pleaz more chapters pleaz

Love where this is going, and the way it's written. Hope there's more!

Oh myy this is interesting indeed! Not usually into fics with abuse/unwillingness, but you are making it work. I am so glad Sesshomaru said he was not going to rape Inuyasha, but I bet Inuyasha will still fear that possibility, which will make Sesshomaru feel even worse. I like how he is starting to feel bad, and you are keeping it gradual so he still feels in-character. I hope he realises what this guilt and desire mean before he does something that really will break his little brother. As in I'm hoping Sesshomaru gets his shit together before he goes too far, passes the point of no return. Anyways, looking forward to more! You are doing a great job!

Please finish this really good story.

I enjoy this story greatly. I love the idea and I find this story refreshing and unique. I have read a lot of Inuyasha fan fiction and this is the only fanfiction that has Sesshomaru using the kotodama on Inuyasha. I rather like how at first you have Sesshomaru plotting terrible things for Inuyasha, yet, he feels guilty and cannot explain his guilt. I also like that Inuyasha hates many things and is so thoroughly confused. Who would have even informed him about sex anyway? Kikyo? Myouga maybe? I like that you captured that essence of innocence and confusion while maintaining some of Inuyasha's original fire. I really enjoy this story and I sincerely hope you will continue it.

I love your work on this. One of the best version of this concept. I hope you decide to continue with this compelling story. Thank you for posting your work.

that was really good. keep it up

Me likey, more please ^-^!

wow loved it so much i just want more to come sometime soon.

This was an interesting and captervating story i hope to see more soon.