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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

person lost child
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep up the great work. I would write more, but I'm tired, getting sick, it's late and I need all my rest for tomorrow because it's going to be busy for me. So please update soon
person animepunk93
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit !!!!!!!!!! What the hell is going to happen next UPDATE I must find out!!!
person InuGrrrl
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay -that was great! What a cliffy....WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
person InuGrrrl
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only read the first chap but i didn't want to wait.
BRILLIANT PLOT!!! I'm going to read every chap
right now, but I wanted to share that with ya!
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im more than wiling to whait for chapter 10 this is a magnifacint story so keep up the fantastic work
person Magdalen Millicent
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*apluads* You rock!
person selbabybye@comcast.net
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sel~
person kittenclaws
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story and can't wait for the nevt chappie thanls for sharing it with us
person anon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you deleted my other review! I'll just place another then. It wasn't a flame, I even complimented on your writing talent. My only complaint was that you kept pushing your story up without updating. By deleting my review, it reeks of guilt. If you weren't knowningly pushing your story up to keep it up front then the review shouldn't have bothered you. By deleting my review it clearly says thats what you were doing and didn't like it when someone called you on it. Shame on you!
person vivian
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep Yep! Awesome story. Kudos