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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

person selbabybye@comcast.net
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA

OMG...that line was priceless *so does that mean if I fucked Naraku too?*

HAHAHAHAHAHA

Omg *doubles over in laughter and has tears streaming*

I can't wait for more!

Sel~
person inuficcrzy
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sucked? oh no, no, no, no, no! this was hilarious! i loved it!
person Catz2.0
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I loved it yet again! Soryy, I would have reviewed earlier but I was on vacation! I hope you update soon! I think it's hot how Inuyasha likes to be domination by his mate, I also thinks it's sweet and very dramatic how Inuyasha is feeling so bad about himself ehen he thinks he hurts Kagome. Awwww I loved it! I already said that I know, but hey, I'm getting my point through. I hope you update soon, because I can't get enough of this story!

Catz out
person ChaosD
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay to updates, regardless of whether its good or not its a step farther in the story and for that im happy. I think this story is great, just make some new chapters soon, cant wait to read them. A little thing thats funny to me is how you have Kikyo being with almost every male in the story at some point in time. (Shes just being a slut cause she craves attention. Hehehe ^_^) Well thats all i can say due to sleep deprivation, until the next update.
person sendosha
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, didn´t mean to insult you but I still don´t like chap. 12! Why? Your fic had a really good story with background and interesting ideas but now I dont´t know. Furthermore there are too many people who seems to forget, that Kikyous body is made from clay, soil and bones which means if someone sticks his dick into it, she would break into many little clay pieces. She has no feelings besides hate and sorrow; no blood, no tears and she cant´t sweat. So please, if you wanted to change these things you should have made a remark becaus than I could understand that someone, especially full blooded youkai with their sensitive noses, would want to have sex with a dead person.
person KILLFRENZY
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Koga-Ginta-Hakkau-Sesshy-Naraku orgi and none of then knew about it till now! I wonder how Miroku will react.

Miroku: *scoots away from Kikyo and hides behind sango*
person mel
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter did not suck at all, so please dont say such foolish things. as always your chapters are wonderful. the update was great! so keep up the good work and please update again soon.
person Altari
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always knew Kikyou was a whore...hehe....:)
person mia
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update and it wasnt bad. keep up the great work
LATER
person lost child
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
boy Kouga is an idiot at times and Kikyo is a slut. Keep up the good story!