rate_review Reviews

Really enjoy the story, but it is missing the lemon? I don't know if you were planning to include it on the AFF site?

Sorry *-*, I reviewed for chapter 13 and missed the part in chapter 12. sorry. Is a wonderful story. Can't think of anything more constructive at this time.

awwwww!!!! i love it, i love it, i love it. why did u have to stop soon?!?!?!?!?! well any ways, UPDATE SOON!!!

This fic is such fun! Love the lemons & the humor.
Well done.

LMAO....I remember my mother walking in on me and my partner once...*blushes red as a tomato*
It was Soooo embarasing...Giggles* I can't wait for the next chapter!
WOOT!!

Sel~

love it can't wait for another chapter or two god imagine your mom walking in lol

Okay, you are sad! How many times does it take to edit? What you should put in there is that your story got bumped back a few pages. I don't wanna hear the excuse you have some 'flaw' that makes you a perfectonist and you wanna make sure everything is spelled right. Edit to your standards before you post it. You are doing nothing more than using editing as an excuse to make sure your work stays up front. Stop being a review whore, its really sad. You do realize that you will make the other author's mad by doing this. They might not speak out because they don't want to sound mean. Us readers start at page one for a reason. To see what is new and what has been updated. It pisses us off when we keep seeing stuff pushed back up that's neither. Delete this review if you wish, but I will be checking. Let me see it gone and I will post another, next one not so nice. Also let me see you keep putting your stuff up without updating. Try being considerate of the other author's that actually take the time to update for us readers.

i reviewed so much i dont have any thing left to say. i guess all i can say is continue the good, exuse me, GREAT work and update soon. oh and i loved the chapter!!!!!

LOL!!!!!!

Kagome's mom walking in on them! I think we should be glad it wasn't Souta or Gramps. The boy would be traumatized and the old codger would start his 'demon be gone!' rutine.

Over all, a nice chapter, though I would have prefered an. . . extended sex scene.

Ummmm... I think I may have missed something... but ..... WHERE in the Kami did Kikyo come from in chapter seven? I mean before the time slip went and had a time hiccup there was no Kikyo with the group... then suddenly in chapter seven Kikyo is there and with the Tetsusaiga. And everyone is fine with it. Did you mean Kaede? I noticed she was mentioned about going but kind of disappeared. The story is very good but that chapter threw me for a loop. I wait for your next update.