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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW THAT WAS THE WAS GREAT I LOVE IT SO FAR CONTINUE AND THEN U MIGHT BE ABLE TO WRITE A BOOK ON INUYASHA J/P(JUST PLAYING) FINISH THIS STORY AND I WILL WRITE MORE

AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how how how how how how how how hoHOW could this not be competed????? arg, i was all set to give a mostly glowing review, with only a few slight critiquings, and now i find it's not done???? i hate stories that are this good that arent done! first the youkai and the exterminator, then possesion, and now THIS??? argh! this is so frustrating!! and to top it off, i cant even remember half the stuff i wanted to writ ein tis review. but i will calm down, and try to remeber them,a dn write the ones i do remeber. ok?! so here goes:

frst, even though i knew almost instantly wht was going on with the while kagoame/tomi thing, cause it was a little obvious ( but not in a bad way) and i have seen it done before, i still really really really liked it! it was a good idea, once i got used TO the idea of this new character tomi, then it was just really awesome! i did have a bit of a problem with kagoame's adn inuyasha first time though, it didn't quite fit, it needs a small adjustment, if you ask me, (though im sure there are people ready to rip my heazd off for saying this) and some things after it, needed a small adjustmen, its like you had this idea in your mind of where you wantd the story to go, then three quarters of the way through, you changed you mind a little, and decided to go in a slightly different direction. NOW DNT GET ME WRONG, i dytill liked your story a lit, as you could probably tell from my above comments, i just htink that it was jsut a little off, everthing from their first ime on. it still works, it just has a different feel to it. but again, only a slightly different one, and its still really good! umm........yeah, thats all i can remember or think of right now, so that all im going to type for now. you need to update soon thoguh, or i might just go crazy form waithing for one the the three stories im waiting for to update (this one, and the two mentioned above) so, PLEASE! UPPDATE SOON!!!!

ok, my review is right above this one, so im not going to re-tell you what i think, i just have ne question....what one earth was it that inuyasha said, when thy were talking about weddings, that made everyone so mad???? it couldn't be keh, cuold it?? and if so, WHY???? does that mean someting that i dont know about? and if so, PLEASE tell me, it so agravated me to not know what happened there!!!

myyyyyy godness, ur story is soooooooooo good, spetacular, stunning, brilliant, wonderful, cutie, exciting and everything more that i could come up with :D:D its one of the best stories that i've ever read :O u r way too creative, i was tired of the same old bullshit in inu&kaf fictions, you really SAVED me :}:} pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease make a sequal, and make it fast!!!! kisses ;**

I loved it, you have to make the sequel!! I love your stories, except for the Sesshomaru and Inuyasha then Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and Kagome lemon story!!

This was a really great story. I liked it alot. The plot was awesome. I liked how you threw in the whole "Back to the future" thing. that was cool. I can't wiat till you update. E-mail if you dont mind when you do. Thanx. XD

OK......where to start? I JUST found this story and I'm in LOVE!!! So much that I've stayed up to 3 in the morning reading it! I have so much to say its hard to find a place to start, I wish I had seen this story earleir I could have reveiwed before now and then I wouldn't have so much to say now! Ok first off the thing that attracted me to this story was the whole well malfunctioning well thing in the summery, it was so original that I thought Id take a look, at fist I was kind of turned off when I saw that you had added another charector changing the whole storyline (Tomi) but I kept reading because I had to know what happend next. I was amazed when I saw how you tied her in to be Kagome!

Then I loved how you made Kikyo a loving kind person (though a little sex driven, but hell who isnt?!) So many fics portray her as simply an undead bitch, and ya can't really blame them when she tries to come between Inu yasha and Kagome, but in this fiction she did the opposite! I loved it! You have made me love Kikyo again!!! I also liked the thought of Kagome cutting off all of her hair, making her her ownself (even though in essance she was actually making herself Tomi, she doesn't need to know that!) It really made me upset when you told us about Inu yasha hitting her leaving the scars, being so out of charector, but I guess in three years charectors can change quiet a bit, but it made it worth it by how sorry and gentle he was with her afterwards.

Just when I thought this story couldn't get anybetter you threw in Sessy!!!!! Even if he did sleep with Kikyo....which I find weird.....its still Sessy! Though you kind of portrayed Jakan as an annoying little toad (which he is....but hes a FUNNY little toad, which kind of makes up for it don't you think? I mean, sure he whacks people with his staff, and is insulting, but come on! The guy is like 2 feet tall! His staff and insults are all he has! If I was two feet tall and had a staff I'd use it to whack people too!)

OK This is by far the longest reveiw I have ever written! But this is by far one of the best fics I have ever read. I write some Inu yasha fics myself, I fell in love with Inu fics a couple of years ago, but have then become bored because they all became so sterio type, you know inu yasha yells Kagome crys, then he throws her on the ground and they go at it like rabbits for the next several chapters, then somehow kill Naraku and everyone lives happiliy ever after...nice scenario but boring as hell....So I must thank you for re igniting my love for Inu fictions, please don't quit writting this...I would be heart broken.....and I would cry....alot.....and you wouldn't want to see Torne cry...Tis not pretty...there is alot of whining and snot involved, so for your sake and the sake of my sinuses, please update soon!!!!!! I will keep reveiwing (though none as long as this I dont think >>) Now I shall end my rambling!

Thankyou


~Love Torne

PS The grammer was excellent which is a rare thing these days! And the paragraphs were nicely spaced so that for once I didn't get a headache reading !

OKay you may find this hard to believe but I actually forgot to say something that I found very important....that bit were Keade "ran busting ass" made me fall off my bed laughing my ass off XD seriously....its not just that she did the old lady waddle...its the fact that you said she was busting ass......it was just so damn funny!!!!!!! My dogs were looking at me like I was bloody bonkers!!!!!! Rolling on the ground laughing and such.....ANYWAY! now I shall trully end my reveiw....consider this bit a PPS or something like that


~Love Torne

Freakin' awesome chappie! I laughed my head off...i love the way you write!
I love your version of Sesshomaru...I can just picture that hilarious shit!
Definitely looking forward to the next.

loove the story really it is awesome girl keep it up