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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! You're killing me!!! I've read both this story and Learning to Live Again, and they both just drop off right in the middle!! Please, please, please update them soon! I'm DYING to know what happens.
P.S. You're a really good writer. Even the chapters you said you hated, I loved. You're really dynamic. A lot of people whose stories I've read, always write the same way. I get used to the way they write, and it becomes a little boring. I really like that if I had read this story and then read Learning to Live Again, not knowing the same person wrote them, I would never have guessed that they were written by the same person. That's skill.
Pretty please update soon?
person lovette
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story please and thank you
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo damn thats sad like how would you like to go back after your life has been threated and be discovered as the person that dies too bad she is the one who is killled and inuyasha don't know its kagome but then agian kagome reveals herself as kagome 53 years later rite....
person lovette
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story please anfd thank you
person lovette
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue he story please and thank you
person d_metria1980
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, chapter 11 was so funny yet unreal. why oh why did you do that to kikyou. other then that i really enjoyed this story.
person Inurocks528
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMgosh UpDaTe! It is really good story line and I'm anxious to know what Naraku will do!
person quirkymiko
schedule March 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh the story is so tantalizing! please! i need the sequel! when will you finish it!? *sigh* i will wait however long is necessary, but hopefully not too long! BTW you're a very imaginative author and you write very well :)
person Gina
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great i love it you have to let us all know when you put up the other story
person kaome-207
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Update soon!