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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I wasn't to sure when I read the summary, on the pain Inuyasha page, but now I am happy that I did click. I really like your writing style, and I didn't notice any errors. I also like the story idea. It's very original. Please update.
Chris.
Chris.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! great story! such a simple i diea and yet i havent read or seen anyone try this! plz hury and update!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Its DA BOMB! Although I don't think you should have described Inu-Yasha's mate too much. At least just the eyes. After Kagome cut her hair, it was really obvious that she was Inu-Yasha's mate. But I like the idea. The short hair was good, cause then Inu-Yasha wouldn't have recognized her with her long hair. And Inu-Yasha's attraction with Kagome, great! Love your ideas.