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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... oh my... this is one original idea for a story, i write stories with original ideas with a passion but this one caught even ME by surprise, my god, this is one EXCELLENT fic, update soon, please.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far & can hardly wait for more. The only complaint I have is that it's too short & I say that about most of my favorite fics. ^_^
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked cool! great plot!!!!!! I love where this is going! Poor Inuyasha was probably having a bad day:( Update soon please!!!!!! *gets on hands and knees and bows down VERY low hoping that her plea will be answered*
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and a great start, even if it is hard to see InuYasha acting so cruel to Kagome in the beginning, unlikely, but it fits your story, so I'm not criticizing. I hope you find the time to update frequently since I really want to see where this is going. I read a lot of fan fics and this seems to be a unique concept which has a lot of potential. I hope Kagome's knowledge if what it to happen can save her. I can deal with angst as long as I get a happy ending, Please say it will be eventually... ANyway, this looks to be a great fic in the making and I can't wait for more.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! wow...I just wanna say that i was shocked at how smoothly you tell the story and how brilliant it was to have Kagome as Tomiko in the past...if that's wut you meant...haha
neways, how would kagome come back tho if she was killed?? hmmm...
well, you're story is REALLy great and hope to read more of it soon! ^______^
bibi
neways, how would kagome come back tho if she was killed?? hmmm...
well, you're story is REALLy great and hope to read more of it soon! ^______^
bibi
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Kagome really Inuyasha's mate? Please, please say yes. I can't wait to read more of this story. Please update as soon as you can.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it...althrough I can't image Kagome with short hair *thinks* oh well it's still good...^^
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting , im intrigued , i wanna continue reading!! cant wait for the next chappy
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW i was shocked at the origenality of this fic it is with out dought awsome .But who is going to end up with Inu? anyhoo UPDATE SOON OR I WILL HOUND YOU UNTIL YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!! Muhahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough cough* heh heh heh........... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this is a very original twist! I really am enjoying it. I hope you can update soon and get lots of positive reviews. Ja ne!