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that realy is a fucked up sequwnce... but man u need to hurry with the update, i kno u jus had one, but u have the worst cliffies n its killing me!! T_T peez hurry

Hey there!!!! This was another fantastic chappy well done!!!! I hope you update soon and keep up the goos work... EWWWWWWW Kikyo is a little _______ (fill in the blank with anything you like) being with ONIGUMO!!!!!!! nastiness. Update soon

Gosh! I can't believe Onigumo! I can't believe Kikyou! How could she have sex with him! I was horrified but also felt deep pity for Kikyou. I wonder how it would feel to have the one you loved betraying you! Sucks I bet! Kagome is so selfless! I really don't want her to kill him though! I f she does, will that mean that she wont meet Inuyasha? Will That effect it in anyway? Ohh suck a cliffy for me! Thanks for updating so soon. Your a very good writter. I also give you many props for writting such an interesting story for us viewers! Thanks soooooo much! I hope you update soon! With your updating comes great happiness for me! Once again update soon. Your story is very interesting. One last question. Does Naraku know that Kagome is really Tomi?

*squee!* How friggin adorable *cuddles invisible Yasha*

Absolutely outstanding!!!! I love your writting so far. And what an origional idea, so fresh. You seem to be quick with the up dates, so I'll do my best to be patient, which says a lot comming from me.

Really good! Hehe, don't expect too much review on your style or grammar or whatever, I just wanna show my appreciation whenever I read a good chapter. :D

LOVE IT! :) SOOOO GOOD! keep up the excellent work.. and damn doesnt irony suck! ahh Kagome cant die tho.. thatd be horrible..Kagome has to change the past! she Knows whats gonna happen.. id go murder Onigumo lol before he turns into Naraku or whatever.. Tell Inuyasha where his sword is and stop him from dicing his brothers arm off too ( I like Sesshomaru lol hes not all evil) .. and then she could Prevent the Curse Miroku has.. Sangos loss of her family.. cuz Naraku wont be there to manipulate her brother into killing everyone.. etc.. oo also she can keep it soo Inuyasha doesnt get pinned to the tree.. Kaede doesnt lose her eye, and Kikyo stays alive and marries sumone and loves them with all her heart? hehe and heres another idea.. kagome can stay alive and Mate with Inu soo she ages like Inuyasha ages.. and then they will be around and still lookin the same when Miroku, Sango then Shippo are born! sooo cool anyways plzz update soon and keep up the SUPER work!

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good job

Are you nuts?!! That was excellent!! I loved that chapter. I was outraged when Inuyasha hit Kagome. I wanted to hit HIM. But then you explained it and I was like "Ohh!" So I understood. Great story! I love it! Update soon please!!

Getting more and more interesting, i really wish to see how this plays out, this is just so GOOD... it makes me all tingly inside when i think about all the possible endings this fic could have from happy to sad, i mean it, you've struck gold here, you've struck a major gold vein here! I still find it so hard to believe that someone can create something THIS original... sure i know a few people who right very original fics but you, you took me completely off guard with this idea, i NEVER saw something like this coming.

So, keep writing, i'm more than hooked to this fic now.