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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

person beccapatty
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U are seriously one of the best writers ever! I love this story to death! ahhh soooo good.. damn now that Kagome is Inu's marked mate will she get any changes like maybe perhaps turn into a half demon too? then they would be twice as strong and be able to beat Naraku! ahh I dont want Kagome -tomi to die! her and Inuyasha have to stay together forever oo and have cute lil pups with dog ears ! lol ;) anyways keep up the stupendous work and plz plzz update soon!
person dog demon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person mia
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow you are such a great auther!! im happy that you tell us when you are going to update so there wont be as much antisipation. Keep up the good work and dont let me down
Mia
person amhor56
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And another excellent chapter written. Your such a great writter. Im so jeolous! Well I think that was a very good and creative explanation on Inuyasha's spiritual powers and how it helps with the new moon and all! VERY CREATIVE!!! Ahh I hope you write another chapter soon...im very anxious I can hardly wait!
person Catz2.0
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I'm soooo unbeleivably glad that you update soooo quickly! If this was ebay, I give you POSITIVE feedback! lol *giggles at her odd obsession with ebay* I hope you update soon because I'm sooooooooo addicted to your story and I don't think I can live without it any longer! *Sits back in chair with cup of coffee and prepares to wait the night out until update- mmmmmmm Tim Hortons*
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i hope the twit figures it out that tomi is kagome he is beautiful but dense
person mia
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is such a great story. i wish the real series was like this!! its so much better!!!! wow i cant wait untill you update!! SO UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Mia
person crazyNluv
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutly love it!!
person beccapatty
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOMEE!! wow that was a big twist Onigumo and Kikyo being lovers lol although suprisinly it didnt faze me .. they see disgustingly right for eachother sorry im not a Kikyo fan at all! I hope Kagome can Kill Onigumo but stay alive in the process.. keep up the great work and update soon plz!~
person DestinysElixir
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I absolutely love this story and its so original. I like how you've reworked the whole relationship dynamic between Onigumo, Kikyou, and inuyasha. But there is one thing that's been bothering me. *blushes in embarassment*, if onigumo is paralyzed from the waist down, how can he and Kikyou have sex? i mean if he's paralyzed he really can't feel anything from the waist down. srry for being so technical about it but it was kind of bugging me. anyway, please continue, it's a wonderful story and i can't wait to see in which direction you take it.