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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

person Catz2.0
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Im totally addicted!!!! Ib absolutly love how you update sooooo quikcly and youe plot rocks! I had to admit though... I had this one second of "holy shit' when Kagome came accross Naraku in Inuyasha's form and I thought "crap, what if this actually IS Inuyasha and NAraku led her to the wrong guy and she ends up being the one that sealed him to that tree?!" But then, after the spurn of the moment vanished I thought "oh yeah, the moonless night... human night" *smacks herself in the head* anyways that was an Evil cliffy and I hope you update as soon as you van Or I'll sneek into your house at night and....... cliffy! how you like them apples?
person tiffany
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great great great!!!! thats all i can say!!!! the story is flawless!!! please PLEASE keep up the good work!
TIFF
person Anaidil
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a great chapter...I love this story is very interesting.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!
person beccapatty
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW ARE U SERIOUS?? Kagome can't die noo thats sooooooooooo ssadd! Maybe it will change? hmm like she maybe gets seriously injured but Inuyasha uses the jewel to heal her and turn her.. Half demon? thatd be cool soo technically what u sed would be the truth.. last time he would see her ... as a human? lol anywyas keep up the awesome work and plzz update soon!
person Zelix
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm an addict and this fic is the drug, keep it coming and update soon!! I mean it!
person ---
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!! i can't believe it!! does she actually manage to change her past?? or is it supposed to be this way?!?!? I love you story so much...please update!
person beccapatty
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seriously u are the bestest writer ever! I LOVEEE this story.. its soooooo good! man im soo glad that Kagome escaped Naraku. hmm wonder how the future did change? obviously Inuyasha is still alive tho so thats good hehe.. plzz keep up the excellent work and i cant wait till ur next update.. ive added u to my stories list as well cuz its def one of my favorite!
person inu_luva
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
urr sooo meaan!! plzz hury with the next chapter!!!
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I really enjoy your story, plz update more! i can't wait to see what happened next and if kagome really dies!
person Kiyana Va Sala
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Interesting story. And so the past has already begun to change, shaped by Kagome's actions. Why do I get the feeling that she'll mention her real name to Inuyasha before she dies in the Past-Past (Eheh... :P), thus causing the Inuyasha of the Present-Past to not drive her to go through the well into the Past-Past?

Either that or there'll be a 'That smell... that voice... that soul... It's YOU!' scene (Or similar) back in the Present-Past when Kagome awakens Inuyasha on the tree, thus resulting in a 'ripple' effect in their relationship right from the get-go.

Good story, and you're keeping me guessing. Excellent work. :D