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for Changing the Past, Changes the Future

by Ilana

person chanda
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter, I love it. Please update soon.
person mia
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O wow that was very satisfying. It wasnt a bad chapter. it was just satisfying. well thanks for updating. please update again SOON!!!
person SoutasSister
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You pegged Inuyasha pretty good. He always lets his temper ruin the moment, doesn't he? Keep up the great job and update again soon please. Thanks.
person Catz2.0
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FRICKEN CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!! I LOVED IT SOO MUCH I DEVOURED IT IN LESS THAT 5 MINS!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *cough* anyways, I like how you had KAgome rant at inuyasha, though it would have been nice if she made him feel a lil' bad about some of the things he's done and about how she was only leaving so she could save him.... MWAHAHAHAHA that would have been evil!!!!!!!!!! Anyways, you had better update or I'll jump through me transpo well, find you, AND HURT YOU.... OR...... I could simply tie you to the chair and threaten you into writing another chappy..... *evil snicker*
person Jennifer
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story!!!! I get so excited each time a new chapter is up. Just love how this story makes it seem like it could be that way.
I also think the last chapter was very good and how everyone would have reacted.
Great Job!!!! Keep it up!!!! Look forward to more.
person T
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chap want bad. i kinda found it funny wen one minute inu n kags wer fighting then the next their holding hands. though u may not think so, this chapter was very important. it tests how u r really gon portray inuyasha and u pulled it off. inuyasha didnt really seem any more of an asshole than he actually is. u portryed them quite rite so u get 4 GOLD STARS!!! good job
person Zelix
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, this chapter wasn't crap at all! In fact, i kind of expected Inuyasha to say something like "You knew you were my mate all along..." Since well, it was only fitting. Time-travelling can cause a lot of confusion like that, Inuyasha's demon side knew Kagome being his mate from 50 years ago but Kagome had not been truly born at that time, so when the Kagome in the future was born and went into the past, Inuyasha's demon side recognised her but his human side said it was impossible, Kagome, after going 50 years in the past gained those memories that Inuyasha already had and well... this kind of argument was bound to happen. That was confusing i know but time-travelling is never simple, it's probably the most complex form of science/fantasy that there is.

Anyway, for the review: Whoa, simply, whoa... this chapter really upped the ante for the this story, i'm REALLY eager to see how all this goes down... REALLY eager.
person dog demon
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT. LOVE THE CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person fumetsu~hinami
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ITS WONDERFUL!...um.0_0..im talking about the fanfic..yah..please PLEASE put up new chap as fast as ur feet can run! >_< i want to scream with anticipation of what shall happen next!!! *runs away and hides* i shall await in hiding! farewell! we shall meet again lovely writer! >.< .....yah i know ima cornhusker..T_T...U DONT HAVE TO RUB IT IN, DAMNIT!
person T
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inrresting! this is an original. i've never read a story with this plot. Although u wer getting a little to creative (with the inuyasha not loving her and kikyou loving him but onigumo [sp] loves her kinda thing) ur story kept me captivated through all seven chappies. please update! 4 GOLD STARS!!!!! for creativity and apparent writing skills.