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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woa dats deep kool but very deep good job though!!!!!!!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see that in ur profile you hate kikyou too.
well I thought I would give u my little I hate kikyou song enjoy LOL
ding dong the witch is dead,
which old witch,
the CLAY POT BITCH,
ding dong the CLAY POT BITCH is dead
LOL bye and great story
well I thought I would give u my little I hate kikyou song enjoy LOL
ding dong the witch is dead,
which old witch,
the CLAY POT BITCH,
ding dong the CLAY POT BITCH is dead
LOL bye and great story
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story of passion and well passion.. I cant find the words to describe it but it was wonderful. However I noticed the increase in speeling errors, mainly during the "passion" scene. I like how you kept with the tv show and didn't make it some modern stripper named kagome and a client..... That is not how it should be. Dont change who the characters are keep it real....
I look forward to other stories you write about them.
Good Job ;)
I look forward to other stories you write about them.
Good Job ;)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT WORK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this story. I really loved it!!!!! I am a big fan of yours and INUYASHA AND KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey the fic was good but in my openion just a little rushed. But good none the less keep up the good work.
DemonicTenshi84
DemonicTenshi84
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thnks for the reviews guys
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Little too fluffy, being that Inu was OOC, formatting issues were making it hard to follow, but as WAFF.Lemon goes its good for that. Maybe in the next fic we can see improvements. You can achieve fluff and even WAFF with the Angsty/Angry IC Inu. I would love to see another fic, since you have good potential.