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for Her Human Innocence

by amhor56

person leyren
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT. Continue please. I can't wait for more chapters to this story.
Sesshormaru and Rin. yummy! She's so innocent~!
person Gemini
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Where's the rest of the story? *cries* I have to know what happens next. Please?
person Goddness of Evil
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story!
person Roushijin
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rock on....I'm kinda lost but I really do love where the story is leading up too....I've really never read a story with jumps of past and present, so this is new and interesting to follow along with....I must say this is a great story....but I'm lost of where they are at and how old she is......are we in the present of many years....or weeks....so I'm alittle lost, but other than that I'm gonna keep up with this story....so do please Update SOON!!!!!!
person Angelfrommhs
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more I wanna know what happened to rin
person Nahau
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I belive this was a good story, but somethings were a little confusing. I understand that you are flipping between past and present, it's a good concept. Please in the future let us know when your switching. Hope you update soon.
person Church
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NIce nice nice i like it
person mel
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK so far so good. i like how the story is begining. i hope you continue and update soon.