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this is a good story, please update it soon.

Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read if Kagome comes out of the coma, if she returns to help kill Naraku, and how they react to Kougas' feelings for the daughter.

Kagome and Inuyasha had a kid? That is fucking awesome. It also looks as though some people have crushes. Hope you update soon.

I really like this, its new and new is good, and Kouga geing a grump is funny, I'm suprised Sessh isn't more protective of his Neice. Keep it coming ok.

could yoiu please do more INUYASHA parts?

is takara a cheerleader?

I'll bet takara is very pretty..

okay.. a few issues.. one being...
HOW did the others travel through? the
well has only transported Inuyasha and
Kagome.. my guess being bc of kagomes shards
and the fact that Inuyasha spent fifty years
pinned to the Goshinboku... the tree of ages..

but anyways, I know i shouldnt judge because it IS
a fan fiction, but i absolutely HATE that it seems
you are trying or foreshadowing koga and takara being
together... She sounds very pretty by the way.... but
that is beside the point. I noticed a FEW misplaced
and misspelled words but that's nothing major.

This story could be so great, i just wonder why she isnt
at the hosptial with inuyasha, if something like that
happens to your mother, you dont normally fuck around
like she seems to be doing, normally you are by her
side every day you can be as much as you can be until
she has a recovery. Takara is his daughter, i was a tad
but disapointed at how you had their initial meeting
turn out, it could have been a lot better than it was dear.
Why is she participating in something fun, while her mother is dying?
shouldnt she be with inuyasha? shouldnt they be talking as well?

Its just unrealistic is all.

I do like this story and hope you will think about what
i have said. It could really add to the depth if you
were to make the drama a tad more intense by having moments with
inu and takara alone as well as inu and kag.

^_^

I find that I actually want to read more....

now this is a good story. I can't wait till you update again See ya soon.

I have been following one or two of your stories for a while, and decided to check out what else you have written. I am glad that I did, to say the least. This is a very good story and I really like the direction that you are going with it. I hope to see it updated soon.

Sincerely,
Vyncent