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by Leilani

person CommanderX1125
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it to hell, now you went and did a cliffhanger with the child and I'm going to be up all night trying to figure out whom the father is. You have one week to answer the question or else... don't ask what it is yet since it's so horrible even I don't know!
person Anaidil
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!! The baby...please let it be Inuyasha's please, please, please*puppy eyes*....Anyway, update as soon as you can I would really appreciate it...PLEASE!!!
person Kirah
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I now officially hate Kagome's mom. I really hope it's Inuyasha's baby... and Kagome would never have an abortion, even if it isn't. Right? And Inuyasha had better not be an idiot for too long... Please Update! This was a cliffie... sorta... but, as always, I won't kill until there has been an update.
Then you run very, very far away from me.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya, perfect! This is exactly the kind of thing I was talking of to get rid of the shadow. You deserve a gold star, but since I don't have one, I guess I'll give you five and we can call it even alright? I do wish to see the next chapter now, very good...
person lost child
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe, that's so sad, I hope Inuyasha does come back
person Kirah
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... that answers my question... UPDATE! PLEASE! Arigato! Ja ne!
person dog demon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE CHAPPIE. GREAT WORK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person lost child
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. hehe, I like it....hmm I wonder who is the father of the baby. update so we all can find out
person Witch Girl
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved It! Absolutly Amazing!Update As Soon As Earthly Possible!But Don't Hurt Your Fingers!LOL!!!!!!!


Bye,
For Now
person CommanderX1125
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to think this over a while before I said anything since there is so much to say, and so few ways to say it. This is an alright story overall, and so I gave it three stars. The overall story though about Inuyasha and Kagome, is overshadowed by the Muso experience. You'll have to do something grand between the two love birds if you want to get the bad taste out of your mouth. This of course, is only my opinion, and so don't put too much weight in it. Like I said, it was good overall, but it seemed to be more strongly focused on the Muso and Kagome pairing.