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it's a great story! Keep up with the chapters! I'll be looking for them!

I love this story! It's GREAT! Please update soon, I know you have better things to do, it's just it's so interesting! :)

Pretty good. Hope to see more soon!

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OKAY- at first i didnt want to read this story- because i read the reviews, and well i hate it when something happens to Kagome. But i finally did read it, and im glad i did- it was well written and suspensful, it was a well written story. Now i didn't read the chapter that you deleted, but i can guess what it was for the most part. I just want to tell you that i did something like that a long time ago, and i let it get the best of me- so i didn't write again for months. Well i guess my point is dont stop cause a stupid mistake gets in your way. KEEP WRITING AND PEOPLE WONT EVEN NOTICE IF YOU DID SCREW UP
ZEBZ

Hey what a cute story this is...... So i have a question Koishie is Inuyasha right .. well it must be think about it lol..... what story would this be if it was Onigumos (cannot spell)... So yeah its grreat update soon please!!!!!!!!


Sarah

Thank you so much for updating!!! Update as soon as you can please. I would really like to read more chapters!!!

Awsome story! I am glad to finally find an author who can write great lemons! Ur story is amazing and i really want you to put another lemon. I would also like to know what was so special about the baby that you had to leave us with a cliffy at the seventh chapter.
Overall you've really caught my intrest and i will be reading and reviewing your stories constantly. Keep writing!
PS: plz take care of all the spelling and grammar mistakes.Loved your story.

Um, I've had 2 children and was wondering why she would be released the next day when hospitals keep you for at least 48 hours, and why they were having sex so soon after having a baby...she would be bleeding for at least 4-6 weeks after having a baby, most likely had stitches, and would be REALLY SORE!!! Think of doing 10,000 sit-ups...that's what your whole body feels like. Not to mention being EXHAUSTED! Goodness, I did the birth process the natural way and it was not easy, and certainly not without pain. I do like the story, but wished that the info was more realistic. Thank you and good job otherwise.

Please give us more of great one...
Mistress of words...
*cries*i want more!!

awe I am soo glad that things are working out for them. I have a question though. Maybe I missed it, but did kyoushi have ears or something? Cant wait for more.