rate_review Reviews

You are NOT bad at writing!!! If you want to quit I can't stop you but I wish you wouldn't....... :)

*jumps up and down cheering!* Dont give up, your great! *smiles* The story flows and the writings good, therefore it's a great piece!

I just read this with my friend who just reviewed (does that make sense?) Anyway I think this is a good story, one that should continue.
I mean you just got two new fans lol... (sess/kagome/oc) (lanya votes that also)

pleasse update soon i really like ur story so far

Holy Hell! That was funny. A title I would suggest would have to be just this. Holy Hell! As for a pairing: Naraku and an evil
vicous tentacle alien from Mars would be good. Sorry. I would just love to see Naraku get what ever he gives out. As for a really crazy pairing. Crossover starring Ranma (male and female versions) meets Inuyasha cast. Especially Miroku. HeeHeeHEEEEEE! Just so long as our favorite villian Naraku gets his whatfor I'll be happy. So, I'll be waiting.

Yeah, I like hentai fantasy it sounds well hentai... and I would like to see these pairings please if you can:

Naraku and Sango
Sesshomaru and Kagura
Inuyasha and one of Kagomes friend, and make Kagome jealous
A young Inutaisho and a young Iyazoi (I think I spelled her name right)
Sesshomaru and Sango
Naraku and Kagome

and other characters from other anime or video games
Sephiroth and Kagome and Sango
Cloud and Kagome
Sephiroth, Sesshomaru and either Sango, Rin or Kagome (you know a nice 3some 2 males focusing on 1
lucky ass female) I'm sure every sane woman would like to be with these two silver haired gorgeous males)
And yes I love Sesshomaru too don't we all and Naraku too ^___^

Oh and if you want to get a little more hentai you could like make the male characters on Inuyasha
along with Inutaisho, Sephiroth and Cloud be in a male harem and Kagome, Sango and Rin and other
anime female characters are the masters and the males are their pets.... and vise versa

Or you could just go all out and have an orgy with all the Inuyasha characters, Cloud and Sephiroth and other anime characters...... I hope you will consider my ideas and pairings.... please pretty please

You have to excuse my hentai filled mind its on overload after reading your story with those dreams of Kagome and
Sesshomaru were very naughty....^__^

I think it should be called the first one A. Hentai Fantasy and I think it would be pretty funny if it was Kagura paired with Inuyasha...and I like your story so far too it is just what i needed for today.

Luv,
KayeBaby57

Ok i think passion and pleasure is a good title. And inu/kag would be a good pairing. But off that subject i really like the story. It is awesome. XD

This is a really great story i can't wiat until you update. keep it comin. XD

passion and pleasure kagura there thats my vote anyway i hope you get your 10 reviews you want and i know 4 a fact that you will cause your a really great writer and all thanks for this story so far and let me know you are done hey to make it more interesting why dont you do it as a Sess/Kagome/? story you know one were Sesshy and anouther sexy and powerful demon are fighting over Kagome and eventuallly decide to both have her i love those type of flics if not thats fine but hey a girl can dream cant she *SIGH* oh well hey just had a thought ever wanted to do one of Kagome/Inu No Tashio now that would be great were Sesshomaru and his father are fighting over Kagome i would love to see that *Ha Ha Ha* anyway thats my thoughts i hope you dont mind me letting all my ideas out of my henital closet at ya but oh well i cant complain i guess anyway i'll stop blabbering now and let you get back to writting ok and i still think your a great writer. see ya Sexykitten