rate_review Reviews

I was reading this fic again...for the umpteenth time, and noticed something. Although adverbs are unavoidable, we sometimes use them in place of more detailed description. I have found that when I attempt my best to avoid them, my descriptions come out much better. It is hard work, but well worth it. Try it and see if it works for you. You may have already done that with your later fics. I will be reading them again...of course, and will see if that pattern has changed. Your fics are so great that I just wanted to help a little when I saw the adverb usage that could have been turned into something with more depth. Please don't be angry. I love this series. *grovels at your feet*

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Cool, though it might have been better had you given "her" a name. Though, then again, that might have taken out some of Inuyasha's fear and loathing of "her" and that might have taken away from the story.

That was creeply good...write some more

I didn't see a disclaimer on the fic, though it could be there. Please put one up. I would hate to see this wonderful fic get deleted.

Snowfall

Ah, sorry. Found it. You need to make it stand out a bit more. Snowfall

Well, may I just say, "wow!"? That was highly amusing (in a not funny way, of course), and I enjoyed every last minute of it. I especially liked the fact that Sesshoumaru came right after killing her.
Please pardon the lack of interesting review, as it's 12:35a, and I'm exhausted. I really did feel the need to comment, though; I usually prefer to read and not review, but I enjoyed this to the extent that I thought I should.
I appreciated the new take on this type of storyline, as well. I've read 'sorcerer/ess' fics, and many of them are just repeats over and over again, and the authors generally give no care as to setting up the situation. This was refreshing, especially because you made it plausible. On a normal basis, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha would -never- screw, but your plotline (plot? ha! ^^; ) set this story up with believable, possible circumstances.
And, it was cute, to boot. <3
To conclude: I loved it.
Jaa!

that was angsty and cute in some weird way....... espesially at the end where inuyasha and sesshomaru were taking care of eachother. you shoould write more to it. ;)

::squeal::

Oh. My. God.

SO hot. God. So well-written...and HOT. Man...this is the BEST InuSessInu fic that I've read in...forever. Did I mention this was hot? Man, I just can't get ovr it...

It was -Perfect.-

... I'm ... well speechless...
*note: after reading it over 2 times more* That was great!!!
Well now onto the sequel

That was really interesting. And yes, I personally read you're little chat-thing at the top of the board! ^-^
Anyhow, loved it, and I plan on reading the next one. (Your sequel, I know you made one)
Eve