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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Yeah, the characters are OOC - but who cares! This is fan-fiction, fanon. It is a great story! I loved it! And, to read that you wrote this when you weer so young speaks of a greater accomplishment than some of the stories I have read by persons who have written their first stories at an older age. Great Job!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pathetic.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normaly I don't do this but it has come to my attention that you have insulted one of my prefered SasuNaru authors and that you said and I quote that she 'sucks'.
Well to be honest what happens between fanfiction authors is none of my business since I am only a reader. A veteran reader just so you know.
But I am not going to let you just go and criticize someone who has a different way of thinking than you. You like SasuSaku, that's fine, I don't care and neither do the rest of the SasuNaru fans. But just to let you know; if you are homophobic or anything similar then don't read yaoi. You're not obligated to since this is a pastime not a chore. That is why authors bother with the warnings; to tell those that dislike the pairing, theme or whatever that they won't like their fic for that reason and to make the fans of the pairing read it. So if you see a fic that warns the readers that it contains yaoi or any kind of pairing that you do not like then kindly search for one with your preference. Don't you think that this is smarter and less time consuming than criticizing other authors of what they like?
Normally I wouldn't waste my time with someone like you but I would like it very much if you leave the SasuNaru fans and fanfics alone if you don't like it.
Just to warn you that if you think that wasting authors' time with useless flames like yours is right, they will do it to you as well.
Oh, and one last thing. About this story, it's not bad but I've seen better. You may have kept both Inu Yasha and Kagome in character but the entire "she can't love me 'cause I am a freak" syndrome from Inu Yasha and the "I'll love you no matter what" speach from Kagome is too similar to the Manga/Anime. All that is original is how you put this in modern times but as for the rest I can just watch the Anime or read the Manga. So you could use a little more creativity.
That is all.
IDM
Well to be honest what happens between fanfiction authors is none of my business since I am only a reader. A veteran reader just so you know.
But I am not going to let you just go and criticize someone who has a different way of thinking than you. You like SasuSaku, that's fine, I don't care and neither do the rest of the SasuNaru fans. But just to let you know; if you are homophobic or anything similar then don't read yaoi. You're not obligated to since this is a pastime not a chore. That is why authors bother with the warnings; to tell those that dislike the pairing, theme or whatever that they won't like their fic for that reason and to make the fans of the pairing read it. So if you see a fic that warns the readers that it contains yaoi or any kind of pairing that you do not like then kindly search for one with your preference. Don't you think that this is smarter and less time consuming than criticizing other authors of what they like?
Normally I wouldn't waste my time with someone like you but I would like it very much if you leave the SasuNaru fans and fanfics alone if you don't like it.
Just to warn you that if you think that wasting authors' time with useless flames like yours is right, they will do it to you as well.
Oh, and one last thing. About this story, it's not bad but I've seen better. You may have kept both Inu Yasha and Kagome in character but the entire "she can't love me 'cause I am a freak" syndrome from Inu Yasha and the "I'll love you no matter what" speach from Kagome is too similar to the Manga/Anime. All that is original is how you put this in modern times but as for the rest I can just watch the Anime or read the Manga. So you could use a little more creativity.
That is all.
IDM
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg iam so freaking happy for them iam so happy they made luv and on top of that they are getting married iam so happy for kagome i really am i hope they have children and i hope they are as cute as kagome and inuyasha are !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for lemons! Good job! Continue on as a writer young one^^ Teehee!