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by Aleke

person frimmy
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hmhm*
you haven't updated in a while...
but i know you didn't forget about this story. nope, you DEFINATELY DID NOT forget about this story.
yup, because if you know what's good for you, you won't ever forget about this story, until of course it's finished, then by all means you may forget about it, as long as there is a sequel. and then a sequel to the sequel. then a sequel to the sequel to the sequel.
am i spelling sequel right?
aaaaaaaannnnnywaaaaysss...
moving right along.
so.
i know about homework, i have too much to survive with. especailly since almost all my teachers hate me now!!!!
like, math: strongly dis-likes me with a passion.
french: doesn't like me, read previous review to know why.
english: i'm not sure. i think he likes me, but is always making fun of my heritage (kiwi-ness) so yeah...
gym: thinks i am....odd.....
History: thinks i am beyond odd.
biology: thinks i am so beyond odd i am entering the twilight zone od odd-ness-osity.
etc. etc.
i don't think there is one teacher who doesn't not like me, well myabe except for tanach, but i do know that evry teacher thinks i am wierd. or odd. you pick.
i prefer odd, it makes me sound less insane...
anyways, i know this isn't a review REALLY, it's more like a pointless reminder to update with a whole lot of uselss information because i'm bored.
yup, bored.
i got home, and i was high on life because...well let's just say my intake of sugar that day tripled, and well, i was just happy...
and then i heard the power was out, and i was celebrating (HOORAY FOR BAD WEATHER!!!!)
but then i remembered that inu yasha couldn't tape if the power was out, so i freaked, but then i got home and realized, whopee, the power's back. so i was happy/sad.
so i re timed all my shows on the vcr programer thingy, and checked for updates for the millionth time today (what, i get bored in class...) but there wasn't any so i decided to politely yet violently remind you to update. and then we come to this sentence here, which is explaining my explanation of why i am writing this.
ignore that last bit if you didn't get it....
i'll leave before i get clobbered...*ducks from pointy objects being thrown in my direction*
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
(have you figured it out yet?)
person Frimmy
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
c'est moi encore..
just a little random note, in your disclaimer, isn't it sob inconsolably?
i mean, uncontralably works too but...
nee ways, update and yeah.
so i won't have to kill you. it would be a shame to watse such a perfectly good author....
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
person hiro
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ofcourse, as would anyone, a tampon IS a cruel and bloody way to die... I guess ^_^. And yes I did write in spanish. As I always do when Im pissed, just ask my ex. He and I used to fight alot and I would usually curse and fight in other languages other than Spanish or English. I would curse the shit out of him on japanese, frenc, italian (hn italian is the best language to curse just like french: I once called him a "filio di putana" ::filio is pronounced like the word feling but with an "o" at the end filio:: ::di is pronounced like "dee":: and ::putana is pronounced the "u" the same way as the "oo" is used in moo, the "a"'s are pronounced as the "a" in apple:: so you do the math and what it means is son of a bitch. See pretty (matrix quote: like wiping your ass with silk.)
person Frimmy
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sure, have all the time you need.
anyhoo, yeah, that pretty much answers all my questions....
and one more thing, what's your website url? cause i'd really like to see it, i didn't even know you had one! and not to mention i am in it! *basks in her own glow due to uneeded ego boosts*
hey, it's your fault!
anyways, now to review the last chapter.
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
unexplicable plot twists will drive me insane. and here i was thinking that this story would end with a happily ever after but NO!
that's not allowed to happen. instead stupid freakin NARAKU has to come into the already-over-complicated picture too!!!!!!
grrr....
nee hoo, i think the idea works, having sesshomaru kill inuyasha sounds...so naraku-y-ish that i could swear you are him in disguise! *yanks off baboon pelt* AHA!!
you ARE naraku, i knew it!
now i will have to kill you. *runs after you with jakotsu's crazy sword thingy*
hang on, you're not naraku! you're a girl!
oops.....hehe....pay no attention....
sorry about that, i got up early and it's hurting my brain.
so. my usual message.
update or death.
or cookies. one of the three.....
Frimmy Frimella Frimster McFrimm.
ps, if you want another hint, the matess company is also the name of a famous aroebics guy.
person Lady_Hoshi
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for the update. *sighs with contentment* i need more sesshomaru. and more of the twins and Rin. thank you for before on the compliment of my name. i will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person animegirl007
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should have known that devil Naraku would show up and start some mess......If Sesshomaru wasn't so excited about finally seeing Rin, he would have figure out that it was some kind of trap.......the next chapter should be action packed I hope....also, quick question are you saying that the twins now know that Inuyasha is their Uncle???? because of that one sentence in the story kind of hint around to that????........ either way ....keep it coming!!!!!!!!!
person Dimepieceleo
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you are so bad that chapters was great I can't wait to see this fight about to go down
DAMN YOUR MIND IS EVIL
I had teachers like that to at one time
person Altari
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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MORE
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Yeah I know I'm demanding! I'm loving how it's going!

Yayxxors for driving. Getting your wheeled freedom is awesome.....Just don't drive too fast! The State of Illinois has taken more of my money because I was 'speeding.' I think the speed limit should be subjective...
person Ren
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, you're so funny...tee hee hee, *hugs back* arigato...even if it's a simple hug on the net, I haven't recieve a hug for the longest of time. It's not that people don't want to give me one, it's just I can't stand for when they hold me, it feels...awkward, how can they do such things? Hugging someone without asking them first, I didn't say anything to make them want to touch me, so why? I don't get it, I told you some things to get something out of it, a piece of cake, and a hug was nice, I thank you so very much, but them. Lets not talk about it anymore, I look forwards to talking to you on mail, and well for my school..hmm, I can sympathize with you on Chemistry and Alegbra, though I'm naturally good at those stupid subjects, for some odd ball reason, I always hated them.

I already took Physical Science, Biology, and more, but never Chemistry so this year, I took and, and so far, it's a piece of cake, literally, the teacher put shaving cream in a pie container and SMASH it into a volunteer's face, *luckily it wasn't me* hahahahahahaha. It was hilarious, he said, "If you didn't want to do this, you shouldn't have volunteered without knowing what you were volunteering for, or at least ask something about before participating in it..."

HAHAHAHAHAH, he's so funny, then there was my classes being messed up, my cramps setting in, it was one word, HELL! I hate this...I'm in pain as we speak, okay I've got to cut this short, but please, if you're free, go here, and check it out please...

http://crazievikki.deviantart.com/
person New Fan
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!! That was very clever what you just did. I can not believe that your mind came up with that.
When Sess sees those childeren, he will think the worst. Great chapter and update really soon.