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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter. Hope you update fast.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a real good start, I really like your plot. But, add space lines between your paragraphs and indivdual dialogues. It will be easier to read that way. And little more with description...yeah we all know how Sesshomaru and Rin usually acts, but maybe their different in your story...bring their characters out more..definitely Sesshomaru new mate.... I need to know more about her. (PLEASE DO NOT TAKE MY SUGGESTIONS AS A FLAME....I DID NOT MEAN IT TO BE THAT WAY!!!) I really like your story and I would love to read more of it. So, keep it coming....
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I usually love reading stories with long chapters, but if you feel that you can only pump out short chapters for right now...that okay...remember no one is pressuring you to do more than you're comfortable with......so until next time....keep on writing.
PS
I usually love reading stories with long chapters, but if you feel that you can only pump out short chapters for right now...that okay...remember no one is pressuring you to do more than you're comfortable with......so until next time....keep on writing.