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for Run

by Aleke

person anonn
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liiike ! a nice little backrub and some angst..l.. good job
person Vanessa
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that Rin has guts. I would pist of too at my husband if he were sleeping with my servants. Well Keep writing. I do enjoy this story alot. It is speacial in someway. Never mind me. I am just a freak. : )
person animegirl007
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it is fun hating her!!!!!! Another great chapter....I'll be there for you when you update so at least you know you will always get a review from me......update soon
person Blackat
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful i loved it please hurry and finish!!!!!!
person Vanessa
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No Problem. I see talent in you. Great lemons I must say *blush*. Keep writing. Great Job.
person Vanessa
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No Problem. I see talent in you. Great lemons I must say *blush*. Keep writing. Great Job.
person animegirl007
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It looks much better visually and the story content......."OUTSTANDING!!!!!!" You brought out so much more of the characters descriptions...good job...good job....Now the Sessy mate( Sorry I can't remember her name yet) What a hoe!!!!! Did she forgot that Sesshomaru is a dog demon??? and he will smell the scent of that servant on her???? whether he cares for her or not ...you show my baby respect!!! I hope you will make Sesshomaru do something to her, so she will remember that one truth......You made it so easy for me to hate her more.....keep it coming....I can't wait until Sesshomaru finds real joy in Rin's arms.....I'll be waiting........
person Ren
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Te ehee hee, and yes the update was soon enough for me, I was so EXCITED!!! I kept checking for updates for this story, te hee hee, I was wondering when Sesshoumaru will make a move on Rin...Tee hee hee, great chapter though. I really enjoyed it, lol, Sesshoumaru really did embarrass that stupid beauty, Kimiko. Geez it's women like her that makes me fume, because of women like her, men in my school berate for what I am and represents, saying you can't do it because YOU'RE A GIRL!?! A FIRL!?!?! Oh MY GOD was I angry!!! Grrr them, I hope their wife will beat them into a pulp for taht when I tell them, if I ever see tham again....tee hee hee, other than that, great update, and if you may, please, please, onegai, make the chapters a bit longer....thanks a lot besides taht though....tee hee hee, I'm so happy!!! YOU UPDATED!!! Wai wai, *jumps aroudn the room laughing and gigling like an idiot* matta ne, until the next update...rootin gor you!!!
person Ren
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I...think the story was...interesting...and hope you update soon.
person Luna
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it, sesshomaru hates her ^^