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Hey I still love the story and I understand about making the child full demon, Sesshomaru would have smelled it and made her stay...... Some questions: Will Sesshomaru ever find Rin and the twins. And if he does what will his reaction will be to his pups and Rin. Will he let her know that he misses her and that she can become his mate. Who will find Rin first Jaken or Sesshomaru? Or will Sesshomaru follow Jaken and lead him to Rin and the pups? Then after that Will you please let Sesshomaru KILL Jaken for sneaking around trying to hide Rin's scent and thinking that Sesshomaru actually wanted his stupid green ass? Please kill him off but only after Sesshomaru finds Rin and the pups...... Thank You ^_____________^

Thank you!!!! I'm so happy you made her have twins, and one of thier names was one of my suggestions. YEA!!!! Now, as for Sesshomaru....you're breaking my heart, he needs to find Rin and his kids. I couldn't believe that in his dream...he was scaried of the two demons(AKA his kids) that were protecting Rin??? NO!!!! Sesshomaru fears nothing!!!!(ARGH!!!!! I might jump of a roof, because of that comment)......

Finally, Jaken....He must be crazy, if he thinks Sesshomaru cares for him.....Oooo!!! I can't wait until Sesshomaru find out what Jaken did!!!! Someone going to get killed!!!! Keep it coming......I'll be waiting...

Tee hee hee, it's nice to know someone agrees with me when I want to straggle kids, tee hee hee, oh course I wouldn't do it truly, but you know what I mean. I've ben baby-sitting since I was 5 and that annoys the hell out of me. Since now, I have 4 kids to baby-sit. Greee, oh wells though, I'm thankful you chose one of the names I suggested....tee hee hee, I'm happy, I had a feeling you were going for Kaori. ^+^ personally, I like that name best too, tee hee hee, I am thoroughly happy with the outcome with the chapter so far, oh yea, about the chapter becoming different from what you planned is actually a good thing. It means you are becoming better at what you are doing, and becoming more creative, trust me...I know..it happened when I was drawing, I was planning to draw a female all sad and stuff, the next thing I know she as smiling...SMILING!! Seriously, it's better sometimes to not have any idea but one and start off with it and go from there. I doesn't mean your bad or anything, it's good, tee hee hee, helps me a lot, tee hee hee, well I am still here, and don't worry about the long update, I'm happy you took your time, it's a great chapter so don't sweat it. I love this story, my favorite autor...so keep it up, relax...enjoy life and write the story base on what you do in life to, or better yet...relate your feelings to Rin's or someone in the story, it will help with descriptions you make in the story. Not that it's not good, just a suggestion, I had a lot problems with descriptions, not with emotions, but descripting some thing, that's why I'll turn out ot be one terrible writer...te hee hee, still rooting for you!!! Keep up the great work, very honored for being mentioned, and hope you will continue again some time soon.

=) Awesome! I'm so waiting for more...oh...............dammit I hate picking up stories at a cliffhanger. Where's the next chapter??? Nicely done. :)

`~Becky~`

something hard to find but a story where the people..act like they would, i hate it when they make Sessy all nice. anyways i love your story please update

Huh? What did I say? I was probobly crazy. Well I have to give it to you. TWINS!!! That was a great comeback. Please continue.

I am so stupid. What I mean by Inuyasha's feet was that since she will be having half demon baby's they will suffer like inuyasha sis when he was young. I am so sorry for not making my self clear. I mean that they will walk through the road, but not the same way. Sorry AGAIN.

i heart this story!!! i can't wait for you to update!!

I do not mine that you stray away from the challegne. I just hope that you will have most of the major
points that I am looking for. I like this chapter and think twins will work greatly in this story. My question
I have is, who will train them since they are half-breeds and no respectable full-blooded demon with great
fighting skills will train them. I was thinking of Rin and the children meeting a traveling chinese monk that
knows all arts of kung-fu and swordmanship. It's just a suggestion. Update soon.

This story is great! And yet its sooo sad :-( Poor Sesshoumaru *tear* After the baby is born is Rin going to stay with the old lady? Or is she going to find a new home (and decide to be a healer)? Lol, the healer part would be cool. Is Rin going to meet Inu-Yasha and they're going to be best friends? It would be really cute, cause the baby would be like "Uncle Inu!" and Inu-Yasha would teach the kid about how to be a hanyou. And then Inu-Yasha meets up with Sesshoumaru and things get interesting.