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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, umm..you reviewed my story, One Night Stand, and I'm hoping you can read it again, I have 4 chapters up now, and it's been somewhat changed, so could you please read/review !!! :)
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u have alot of stuff in your chapters an there very short anyways i think if ur going to add THAT MUCH um "stuff" in fron of ur storys it should have longer chapters anyway thats my intake :)
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have no idea how much that sucked let me give u the reasons:
1.) For the fact that her family could hear everything and decided to ignore it was kinda dumb
2.) Kagome's mom would not just say wanna little snack after her room fell through the ceiling of the kitchen
3.)Kagome's sneeze would not have caused him to go up in the air like that [but i liked the part where he came down forcing him to be on top of kagome!]
4.)No one puts heavy duty duck tape on their pussy!!!!
5.) It's just stupid!
I'm still gonna read this story though so don't worry! ^_______^
hopefully it will be better next time!
1.) For the fact that her family could hear everything and decided to ignore it was kinda dumb
2.) Kagome's mom would not just say wanna little snack after her room fell through the ceiling of the kitchen
3.)Kagome's sneeze would not have caused him to go up in the air like that [but i liked the part where he came down forcing him to be on top of kagome!]
4.)No one puts heavy duty duck tape on their pussy!!!!
5.) It's just stupid!
I'm still gonna read this story though so don't worry! ^_______^
hopefully it will be better next time!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! INSANENESS! (runs around) Ohhhh...bBUZZZBUZZZZBUZZZ! Hahahaha! Baka Kagome! She knows nothing about animals, Or deos she!!! AHHH!! Oh i laughed so hard when the bed fell right down and the moms like, "Would you kids like a snack?" SUPER!!! Haha doing sometihng worst, my mom whould think that worst!!! Haha!!! SO MUCH SUGER! Nani? You lost me in the A&W root beer bottles, Yah funnynesssssss
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beavers are soft and cuddly and have a big floppy tail!!!!!!!!!!! i like ilike the the story story!!!! woooooooooooooooot cows from thy southern part of my boddyy say moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.....rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.......eeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmmmm yeah about that last reveiw see here i was alil drunk and had a magik in me mouth.. (WEED) good job on the chapt welllll ummm moore please. oooooooooooh rum
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins back* My what pretty teeth you have there, Update ^-^
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa why there be no updates waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :(
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter three was..shocking =D and you're right. Inuyasha is acting like acomplete doggy ;) haha update!
D.I.
D.I.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy castrated weaner dog from asia THAT ROCKED MY WORLD MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!