rate_review Reviews

I found your story very enjoyable. Loved the ending with Seeshomaru.

Oh god so good so good please write another one

I liked it. Would have preferred a bit more discription...how I love to torture the innocent *sigh* and Kagome being raped by the man she loves really would have been perfect. But oh well. It gave my shoulder devil something to giggle over. Good job.


Good times and rock on,

Dom

...Well, I'm not going to tell you that it sucked, because...it didn't.
Sorry, this story has me a bit disturbed, and it'll take me a moment to become comprehensible again. ^^;
Frankly, I like dark fiction (though I have to take it in small dosages), and this was fascinating to me. I enjoyed it a great deal, especially because it -did- disturb me; a dark fic that doesn't isn't something I really consider as such.
Other than characterization, which other reviewers have covered, there's only one thing I can think of that would have made this better: spreading it out over several chapters. Now, don't get me wrong, it's incredible as is, I just couldn't really get a sense of time; with multiple chapters, the feeling that time is passing would be more prominent.
So, I suppose that all I can add to that is that I really enjoyed this, and wouldn't mind seeing more of these types of stories from you. (I've read several of your others, and they are wonderful. 'Suffer,' is one that comes to mind while I review this particular fic.) Jaa!

Hey again. Great story, I loved it! Specially the Inu torture. And the Naraku/Jakotsu parts. Think you could do another one with those two? Or a sequel to this one where they meet each other in Hell? That would be cool. Anywho, me back to reading. Adios!

i wish i knew more people like you and your frind that challenged you! i really love this story, its just so mean and evil, and wow! i agree with you though, inuyasha didnt deserve that, but it was definatley a good story! and you even kept them in character and everything!
i think thats actually a fitting end for jakotsu - he certainly didnt seem to mind terribly much, and he got what he had wanted.
Naraku's such a coward! LOL! you seem to have gotten into his mindset reather well for this story though which is kinda creepy X.x

Oh I really liked this. I'm so glad you mentioned it!! Ohhs that was kinda dark. *coos* I loved it!! Naraku was being so Naraku-ey *coos* Ohss the thought of him pounding into Jakotsu as he's pounding into Inuyasha *extreme mental image hentai happy thoughts* Hehe!! I just adore the dark hottie and all his hotness.. Anyways, I thought this was really good!!

that was so great! Jakotsu is so cute! but, he deserved to have the opertunity to rape inuyasha! inuyasha shouold be loving Jakotsu, not kagaome... *nods* well, i must read the others story, so i am off!

~Your best-eset friend Kira

I'm happy to see a Jakotsu story posted here. There are so few of them.

I really like the Jakotsu/Inuyasha pairing but I can't find many stories.

whoa! that was kinda sad! but good!... but sad! i'm going to have to read something fluffy now! ;) anyhow, it was nice... ;)