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Oh, my. That certainly is a long response, but I do appreciate it. I actually did not realize that you also wrote Forbidden, since I read that one first. It really was a fantastic story. I applaud you for having original story ideas as well. I can imagine many varieties of hypotheticals spinning from a series, but I need to have a series to work with first. I can not just create original characters *sigh*. I find it interesting that you were a beta. I am sure you were good at it. Now, on to the review. Heavenly. I admit, I have considered the possibility of Sesshomaru helping Kohaku, but only if he were in the right mood, so to speak. You gave him excellent motivation, and I thoroughly enjoyed that. I also liked reading Sesshomaru's musings... you definitely kept him in character. Marvelous. And it was so nice to find an update when I got home from work. (I had such a hideous day at work, I seriously considered simply collapsing after I got home, but it seems that I am addicted as well... the computer called to me so temptingly... I had to come over and see if there was anything new.) I will continue to be your fan regardless of update schedules, but I must say that I am glad you aren't taking two years for this one. I am also glad that you know where the story is going. I am just enjoying the ride. [hmm, no sexual references intended] Okay, my brain is shutting down now. Until next time, dear lady. *returns hug*

oh ok good...my brainache is gone..you have no idea how often i get those but i liked this chapter. i like they way youwrite about how sesshomaru will rationalizes things... wow i gave myself a brainache thinking about how to word that but anyway please continue!!

you're cnfusing me now! are miroku and sango gonna be together or is it just going to be sesshomaru and miroku?? you're giving me a brainache but please continue!! i'm addicted this story!!

I love how you went into how things have changed so much in the past 500 years *the beauty of the land* Poor Miroku is so torn between Sesshoumaru and Sango!! Very realistic approach on how you lose one love to go to another, yet wonder about the maybes, what if ect Ohhs a perverted thought of a 3-way with the 3 parties involved entered my perverted mind *like that's something new for me to have hentai thoughts... shifty eyes* Great job once again! *stands on fence and looks over cliff*

Well, here I am reviewing again on the same day. (This is by no means a complaint, dear authoress.) After reading your 'reviewer responses' I decided to actually go and read all the reviews before writing mine. I don't usually do that. It is interesting that so many people are religiously following this story. And I have actually *seen* the commercial Kira was referring to. (You have seen those water commercials, haven't you?) And Shanna seems to be high on sugar but I won't complain since she writes long reviews just like I do. And bob faithfully reviews everytime. Kudos for consistency. Now, on to the review. Your descriptions are exquisite and quite beautiful, and I'm slightly jealous over your writing ability. My muse only comes out for reviews, it seems. I happen to think that you are very good at writing fluffy moments, and I'm sure others would agree. I'm a little more selective in the fanfics I read. I can't read angst that goes over the top, and sometimes a PWP will just seem to lose my interest after a few pages. I do agree on the AU though. Especially for Inuyasha, because I love the kanon so much. AU just doen't work for me. And I *can* read a story that hasn't been edited/beta-ed, but most of the time I choose not to, simply because it irks me to read around a 'copious amount' of errors. But don't have low self-esteem, you are a sensational writer and I am thoroughly enjoying reading your work. Feel free to write as much as you want.

whoa, when sesshy said that he could give miroku a child i did not think that, i was thinking mpreg, guess not!! XDDD but that was sweet thou! i liked it! update soon!

So its hopeless, right? Oh well *dances around unfazed* I didn't really want to fix it anyway (I mean, I like getting my fix, I just don't want to be NOT addicted...) am I making any sense at all? *shrugs again* okay, lady, you soooo totally rock again!! you are the bestest, sweetest, kindest person in the world for updating so much... *glares at the other fics that haven't been updated in what seems like YEARS* you are sooo spoiling me =P anyway, keep up the good work and I'll be waiting anxiously (eagerly?? addictedly??? dementedly? *hee hee*) for the next chapter

yay!!!! please please continue!! i wanna see what happens!! i heart this story!!...and i think i said that like 50 times but still...

*Desperately clings to fence, to keep from going over cliff... again* Ohhs I loved the banter between Sesshoumaru and Sango!!! Haha on how Sesshoumaru gave Miroku a child. That was priceless!! *snicker* Hahaha ..I wonder if the ' Unforeseen Obstacles ' is this fence? Good chapter!!

More yummy angst!! *Finally able to let go of the fence... still leery of cliff* I love how you are showing Miroku’s sadness, his missing his friends, yet wanting to be with Sesshoumaru. Then how Sesshoumaru wants to keep Miroku happy, and goes to see the other group!! Nicely done!!