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Chapter 19..Ohhs Miroku was pushing it with Sesshoumaru. I almost felt sorry for him. It is good to see him stand up to Sesshoumaru, and stand up for his beliefs. *I was getting ready to hold the fence again. Yet, much to my delight, I see there is another chapter!!* (Runs off to read it... trips over fence)

Chapter 20 Wahoooooooo a lemon!! Again, I loved how you went into Sesshoumaru being hurt by Miroku’s words from earlier. How Miroku went to the youkai, asking for forgiveness, but not bowing down before him, still trying to keep his dignity intact. I was kinda shocked when Miroku was the topper!! 0_0.. OMR I have to wait ten chapters for a lemon?? I’m being slowly lemony tortureally teased!! *Ohhs I made up a word... hehe* Great chapters!!

i liked it!! XDDD you always update soooo fast, keep it up!!! i love this fic!!

hi. nice couple of chapters... fight (intense) and then make up (sweet). good job. thank you for noticing me... i like you story very much.

that is tru, anyways great update, so sesshy's plan worked, huh! i liked that sango said that at the end, 'hurt him, i hurt you' type of thing, i think it's cute and funny! i really enjoy your fic! update soon!!

YAY! you updated!! i feel all warm and fuzzy now. ^w^ *huggles* dont stop updateing or i shall take you off the list....wait.....can it be a list if only one person is on it?!?!?! *eye twiches* AAAAAA! (im very hyper right now. I saw charle and the chocolate factory and sittign fro that long, in a dark place....it does things to me....makes me hyper....) YAY! great story!!!!!!

oh, and if you dont know, huggle = hug + tackle...hahahahahahahahaha!!!!

Um, you like my sugar highs? Okay, whats that mean... *goes to read other reviews* OH! Cool people are noticing me... well, I'm really really impressed by lilly's grammar (are you a teacher cuz if you are that would soooo totally mess me up XD) anyway I cant help it if i'm liike totally hyper after reading this way cool story (with way constant updates that are sooo nice). Dude, (actually, dudess) I sooo can not believe that it took you two years to finish a story. Wow, guess its a good thing I'm not reading that one right now... well, I've actually thought about Sesshomaru taking Kohaku's shard and saving him before cuz it seems possible to me. and (in a weird kinda way) we actually are getting *some* flowers and sunshine XD and you write almost as much reader response as you do actual chapter but I really like it. *fluttering off now, back later* *sneaks back for a glomp attack* =D

you should do one!! XDDD but i liked how you did this one too! anyways great update, looks like the brothers have an understanding and all! update soon!

hi... i just want to say that you are a good writer and i like your story... um, yeah... that's it... i can't write alot like others do... but its a good story, it really is, i like it

Haha you sound like me about how much you watch TV, if I’m not working, I only turn it on for the News, CSI and Adult swim or to play Final Fantasy and Mortal Kombat! OMR, did I really review on both sites?? Haha, well that shows you, it was a great story!! The Naraku story you did was perfect!! *Gasp, me a hentai? Feigns innocent look*

Ohhs sneaky assed Sesshoumaru! I loved his thoughts on his deeper motivations, and his moments of jealously. ! His sneaky assed plan worked to his advantage!! Those were excellent! That was great when Sesshoumaru realized, he is just like his father and brother now. I am glad he saved Kohaku! On what Sango did, that was really good; I love how you do realistic approaches to uneasy situations. She said thank you, yet she still let him know, she's basically watching his ass closely. *Well I would also, but for other reasons... hentai thoughts* Ohhs what a long review!!