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Love this story. I have only one small criticism to make though, please don't refer to Miroku's prayer beads as rosary beads. That aside, I'm loving the character interaction between Sesshy and Miroku and between Miroku and Rin. It's really touching to watch how readily Miroku takes to the fatherhood he always wanted and the lengths he'll go to to protect his new daughter. I like your lemon scenes as well even if they have been sparse. Please keep up the great story, I'm looking forward to reading more.

I'm with you on mentioning certain things in a story, that matter to me, and will matter to the story later, even though I know sometimes people think, what in the hell did she mention that for.

No more lemons? Six chapters left *that means like only 4 days left of this...gasp.. ill be lost w/o it* (wails) *clings to author's leg* (Notices I'm being pulled to the cliff 'oh shit, she's going to throw me over it...hope I land on a hot youkai') Would it help if I said??... "Resistance is futile, you will be assimilated." Or "Damnit Jim, I'm a doctor not a mechanic!" Hehehe bribery...Another great chapter. I love the drama in this. I liked the vampire, and pulling of the life energy. The sweetness of Miroku being with Rin and combing of his hair, was really sweet and cute. And of course Sesshoumaru's thoughts!! Great job!!

I'm so bored right now, that all i can do is sit here, reading the story over and over again.....heh. I have no life like that. well its midnight basicly, and my dad might be coming back down stairs to makes sure in mot down here.....so, i guess all i have to say is, you keep me accupied, so that means your my anti-drug....YAY!!! i have an Anti-drug besides sugar!!!xP

NO FAIR! T-T well, as long as the story has 1 more lemon, then fine... *sighs* ANOTHER CHAPPTER!go you! well, i have a question. shouldnt have the vampire efected Inuyasha as well, even if just a little bit since he has human blood in him? or am i just making it too difeculte....heh heh heh...well, i must go get some foddies, and re-read the story yet again!!hm....CHEESE!!!

i don't know what i was hoping for but this chapter was longer and i luved it!!!

My, my, another update. Two chapters! I truly enjoyed both chapter 19 and chapter 20. The fight was interesting, especially since it stemmed from Sesshomaru's drive to protect Miroku. After all, Sesshomaru can not help who he is. He is a demon, and as such, enjoys killing. It is a simple fact of life (or fact of fiction, if you will) *stops to appreciate that little oxymoron*. Yet, I also enjoyed chapter 20. The lemon was extremely nice, but the conversation before it was also gratifying. I am simply amazed at how truly in-character you are keeping all the characters of the series, but especially Sesshomaru and Miroku. I have read so many stories that mangle his character into something so different that it is truly a horror to read. My favorite part of the chapter are these lines: "He only ever waxed poetic with Sesshomaru. With one so regal as he, it only seemed appropriate." I adore you for writing like this. Hmm, a lemon every ten chapters? That should not be a problem if you keep updating at this rate. Two chapters per day, ten chapters until the next lemon, that equals five days until another lemon. I applaud you for writing for my favorite pairing, and please keep up the marvelous writing. Oh, that reminds me, what is this about me being a teacher? [Shanna, dear, if you are reading this, that was the funniest thing I have read all day. And rest assured, I am NOT a teacher. I don't think I would have the patience for it. And thank you for the compliment.] But the lovely authoress is correct, many people have good grammar skills. I simply prefer to utilize them when typing. (Now look what you've done to me, I'm responding to other reviewers as well!! It must be addictive...) Please take my eternal gratitude for your descriptiveness and way with words, and continue to write to your heart's content.

OMFG!! YAY! such great lemony-ness *drinks lemonad* yummy! well, no worrying about the chapter updates, so all i have to say, is I LOVE THIS STORY!! *crys from greatness of story* an there better be a chapter 30!!...please...?

Cool cool cool!! Two new chappies, two new chappies, yay!! Wow, you so totally rock the house!! Or is that rock the feudal era? *shrug* Either way, you are soooo nice for updating. And Sesshomaru and Miroku are gettin' it on again. By the way, you are good at putting Sesshomaru on the bottom (I actualy know this Japanese word, its UKE =D) and still making him just as arrogant and Sesshy-like as always. Go, you! you very cool person, you. I like how Sesshomaru protected Miroku, then gets chewed out for it... Miroku seemed to be pushing his luck, Sesshomaru could have killed him (LOL and actually considered it!!). I like how you added that, so that Miroku knew he'd been riiight on the edge. Star Trek? You mean you are a *gasp* Trekkie?? *googly eyed* Dude, are you like, old? (I didn't mean that in a mean way... I mean... *ahem* I meant you are probly a liiil bit older then me. XD) Anywho, keep updating and I'll keep reading and we'll all be happy! *bounces off to go check other addictive fanfics* *bounce bounce bounce*

The lemons have been absolutely wonderful as have been the inner thoughts. I noticed that you added more descriptive detail in the last few chapters. Sess may be a bit devious, but his intentions aren't to harm Miroku. It was so sweet when Sess was finally forced to admit his love for Miroku and decided he could no longer keep his feelings to himself. It was sweet and believable when he said that he loved Miroku, but hated him too. It was nice that you didn't spend a lot of time drawing out the recombination of the group and I am glad that Miroku wasn't forced to make a choice. You really made me laugh with the whole scene of Sess giving Rin to Miroku. When he said he could give Miroku a daughter, I was really perplexed. Then when he offered up Rin, I laughed. And then to save Kohaku!? Wow. I think Sango needs to lighten up a bit. She shouldn't be hating him. He has spared Kohaku twice now! Even freed Kohaku from Naraku. Stubborn woman. I'd be so grateful, I'd forgive him just about anything. He never did anything to her that I remember. It just kinda ticked my off, not at you, but at her. Does that sound crazy or what? LOL I'm very happy that Sess and Miroku are enjoying each other again. It's great that you've shown some of Sesshoumaru's inner thoughts and let us see his concentration on Miroku. I would like to see what Miroku is thinking now. Are you going to keep this fic mostly focused on the couple or are we going to see more of their inner workings and interactions with the group?

You are taking this in a different route than most fics. You are solving problems rather than dragging the angst out far too long. And your chapters have plenty of meat in them. You don't leave the reader feeling shorted. I really like that as so many authors seem to be moving in the direction of not having hardly any progress with each chapter. I appreciate that you don't leave us feeling like we are being starved and hope that I haven't begun to do that. Mmm. I'll have to watch that one.

I really am enjoying this story and wait with anticipation for each new chapter, even though I haven't had much time to review lately.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Oh, I really do appreciate your portrayal of Inuyasha in his behavior toward Miroku. I really believe that he would try to help his friend, despite what others might think.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave