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Ch 1-22:

Okay... I've been reading this fic over the past few days as you've been updating. I feel really ashamed that I haven't reveiwed it yet, but you'll get one from me from now on, 'cause I absolutely love your story. I love the way you update about everyday.

Okay... my reveiw for the story... PERFECT!! I love the pairing. Miroku is my favorite character, so I love reading stories with him in it.

Just so you know, I have this weird like for seeing my favorite characters get: hurt, kidnapped, killed, bound... etc. Hey look! All of those in one story! I'm in heaven now.

Miro/Sess... such a strange, yet wonderful pairing. You should be sure to get more reveiws from this girl. heh heh heh.

*runs off to find more Miroku goodness.*

Wonderful. There are advantages to not being able to sleep and thinking, "Wonder if there's a new chapter yet?" Obviously, the answer is yes. Interesting little plot twist. Hopefully Rin and Miroku would not be forced to see the slaughtered infants, but Rin has seen horrific sights before in her young life. (That still does not mean that she would not be horrified by the sight, though.) I will not beg you to save them, dear lady, as I have complete faith in Sesshomaru's abilities. (But, I seem to recall that you are extremely gifted at writing angst... hurry, Sesshomaru-sama, hurry!) At least Miroku is with Rin, that way she is somewhat protected. I like the mental image of Rin wearing Miroku's rain hat... so cute!! *hugs authoress* And poor Sesshomaru... caring enough for humans that he stays to protect the camp... it's nice that you have developed the plot enough to make it believable. And sequelitis is a GOOD thing. Trust me. I'm also sorry the story is ending, but we do have *checks chapter number* four more chapters. And thank you for such a long response. My closet is completely comfortable, and I like it in here. Thank you for thinking about the brothers' relationship as well. Sesshomaru seems to be softening up just a little, and that is good too. But in this chapter, he is in a killing rage at the end. *scary sight* Well, thank you for another great chapter, and I will *as always* be eagerly awaiting the next installment.

*hands you a bouquet of your favorite flowers* thank you for writing so much. i really love it. nice touch, having Miroku understand how old Sesshomaru is. please continue with the good story.

holy shit! that was intense!! what happened? they were just kiddnapped, explain!! XDDD udpate soon!!

I love this story! i want to huggle you!!! but... *stays far awya* im sick... T-T its not fair...Miroku is so cute when he is happy! I swear when i go to the anime convention, im going to huggle the first guy i see dressed as Miroku, and say "YES!!! I WILL BEAR YOUR CHILD!!" really loud....heheheheheheeee...well, i lurv all of your stories, so when this ends, as long as you have something else for me to read, I'll be happy!! ^^

woo! i'm so happy miroku didn't die!!! please continue!

Chappie 19: Short, but good. Miroku standing up for his belief that the youkai shouldn't be killed was a good way to begin a learning experience for the couple. I loved the way Sesshoumaru said "Drop". That was too cool. Are you posting two or three chapters at a time? I check everyday and wonder how I miss some of them.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Chapter 20: Oh, my poor Sessy. "Dismissed". *sniffle*. His feelings were hurt. That's so sweet. No, make up lemon's aren't cheesy. It happens in real life. I really enjoy the lemons. I love the way you ended it, "...crying out into the night." So picturesque. Lovely.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Chappie 21: Oh, that was too cool. I love action. Two bits in three chappies. My thanks. Sess sure has a lot of faith in Tensaiga. That demon had the gall to try and kill the group and then to kill Miroku! Aaaaah! Bad demon, bad demon. I'd be ready to go on a slaughtering spree of any demon I could find. I'm pumped. Ooooh. Can't wait for the next chappie! But, don't fell pressured.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

it is interesting that the lemons were on 10 and 20 but i was disappointed with chapter 20, i wanted the chapter to go on after the lemon!!!!