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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25-26:
Gomen ne. I meant to reveiw for chapter 25 by it's self, but my mom had kicked my offline before I could.
It's over, eh... but you left so many things unanswered. Where do they go from there? What happens now? Won't they miss eachother? How far will their relationships go? Is it really over, or just a trick, played by Naraku.
*points an accusing finger at you* You're Naraku! You evil evil evil person... er... hanyou... heh heh heh... uh... *cough*
*runs off to find Miroku, where ever he went and dream that the lovely author would write another chapter.*
Gomen ne. I meant to reveiw for chapter 25 by it's self, but my mom had kicked my offline before I could.
It's over, eh... but you left so many things unanswered. Where do they go from there? What happens now? Won't they miss eachother? How far will their relationships go? Is it really over, or just a trick, played by Naraku.
*points an accusing finger at you* You're Naraku! You evil evil evil person... er... hanyou... heh heh heh... uh... *cough*
*runs off to find Miroku, where ever he went and dream that the lovely author would write another chapter.*
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed it!! everything ended well!! so great job! write some more!! XDD
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noo it's over???? i luved thiis story and you should definitely write a sequel...just cuz i said so but you're a great writer please continue writing!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its over?? *wails and cries with you* (pulls tissue from bra, for the both of us*hugs*) I'm going to miss playing with you *ohhs that sounds really hentai... snicker* Seriously, I loved the story, and you responses to everyone. I do believe this is the first time I have been killed a few times though. *thrown off cliff.. landing on Jaken.. died twice then.. falling off cliff a few times.. now at the mercy of Sesshoumaru.. *Ohhs now I'm a youkai sue... dies with smile on face*
My poor dark hottie *wails* Aww love how you went into Inuyasha starting to care about Sesshoumaru's feelings. How they sparred and will become true brothers now. I felt so bad for Sesshoumaru when his human companions went through the barrier and he couldn't see, hear or scent them. It showed how much he really cares for Miroku and Rin.
It's going to be strange checking the yaoi area, and not seeing this one, and checking the chapter numbers to see if it was updated. Ack, I’m feeling kinda lost right now, thinking about it. You wrapped up and ended the story very nicely.Thank you, for allowing me the pleasure to read this!! You really have a way with the written word. Really good, intense story! I will be watching for any other stories you post!!
My poor dark hottie *wails* Aww love how you went into Inuyasha starting to care about Sesshoumaru's feelings. How they sparred and will become true brothers now. I felt so bad for Sesshoumaru when his human companions went through the barrier and he couldn't see, hear or scent them. It showed how much he really cares for Miroku and Rin.
It's going to be strange checking the yaoi area, and not seeing this one, and checking the chapter numbers to see if it was updated. Ack, I’m feeling kinda lost right now, thinking about it. You wrapped up and ended the story very nicely.Thank you, for allowing me the pleasure to read this!! You really have a way with the written word. Really good, intense story! I will be watching for any other stories you post!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW...this story was good...i'm glad i read everything...good job on writing this story.. I love Miroku/Sesshomaru.....
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. And so, as all things in life, this too must end. I am impressed. You tie up loose ends very well. At one point, I thought it seemed a little too analytical, or maybe just like an emotionless recitation of the events, but then I read it again. And then I read it again. I think I was just not very accepting of the end... However, you still kept your style and wonderful way with words, and I love the happiness present. It could not continue on forever, yet you managed a joyful transition to the next stage in their lives. I truly enjoyed this story, and will look forward to more of your writing. You have a fan in me! *hugs back* And I have also truly enjoyed reviewing your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i see what you mean, about sesshy and miroku having a talk and it not really helping ^^ anyways, only one update left??? really? really? it can't end, i want it to go on forever!!! update soon!!