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for Unforeseen Obstacles

by Xakana

person kilala_shippo (not logged onto this sight)
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update by goodness gravy!!!
person Dante
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, that would confuse the hell out of me too. Nice update; a little short but I like it.
person kai
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*starts clapping* XDD i loved it but evil, i tell you evil place to leave it at!! update soon!!
person shadows lurker
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude!Please update.
person bob
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that cliff hanger type thing was just mean.... continue!!
person lilly
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I am enjoying the plot development very much. The chapters are a little short, but that's okay. You have a wonderful writing style, and you are definitely staying completely in character. Please continue with such fantastic writing, I am looking forward to the next installment.
person bob
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what???!!!! you're....you're evil!!!!!! and mean, you just left that cliffhanger, you can't do that to people!! yes go back to writing and hurry up!!!!
person RedShadows
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! :)
person BC1
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! But please bring back Kikyo I like her.
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and interesting. Its not a pairing I normally read. I love the way you working up to them being together, and the way Miroku is having hentai thoughts about touching Sesshoumaru's ass. Hope to see more soon.